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Topic: Breakthrough

Breakthrough TrevorScrivens






Verse 1


      


I can[Bbm] see it in the way you walk


Its[Gbmaj7] there in the way you talk


Your[Dbmaj7/Ab] love is not the friend it used to [Fm/Ab]be


When we kiss[Bbm] you turn your head away


[Gbmaj7] You have nothing good to say


Its no[Dbmaj7/Ab] longer me your eye's long to[Fm/Ab] see




Chorus


I want to[Bbm] breakthrough


And[Dbmaj7] make you


Under[Gbmaj7] stand whats going on in my[Fm] head


I want to[Bbm] feel you


See the[Gbmaj7] real you


Or[Dbmaj7/Ab] pretty soon our love is going together[Fm/Ab] dead


I'm not faking



Verse 2




I keep[Bbm] beating myself up


[Gbmaj7]Falling on bad luck


But [Dbmaj7/Ab] for you life is just a[Fm/Ab] breeze


[Bbm] You're shutting me out


You[Gbmaj7] make want to scream and shout


If I[Dbmaj7/Ab] stay here to long my heart is going to[Fm/Ab] freeze




Chorus repeat




I'm not breaking


Bridge


[Gbmaj7] Through and it hurts[Ab6] me


As the clock ticks[Gbmaj7] down to our last good[Fm/Ab] bye


It was only[Gbmaj7] you and now you desert[Ab6] me


And I[Gbmaj7] still don't know the reason[E] why


Reapeat Chorus to end





(C) Trevor Scrivens 5th December 2020

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Re: Breakthrough

Ctech real good  lyrics and backing track  has an interesting updated  ye  olde english  sound to me, but  I am not sure how it would fit into your lyrics but it is still good.
Happy New  Year  to you and your family and good to see you back here on Chordie.     

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Re: Breakthrough

Trev
Powerful lyrics - hope it's not based on experience.
It is really hard to tell if lyrics fit that soundtrack with out them being melded together.

Good stuff anyway man !
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Jim     

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Re: Breakthrough

Thanks peatle I should have just done melody and chord . Or just piano track and vocal. Ill see what I can do. Happy New year to you and yours. We are all fine I've been visiting my 83 year old father every day since the mayhem began to keep his spirits up  I don't see my grandchildren as much as I'd like but I talk to them on phone vid calls so it better than nothing.

Thanks Jim yes another from experience sadly ,I will try to sing it at a later date. At mo working on a song with reference to the mess we are in at the moment.  Got a melody and title, just lyrics and chords to find. I hope to enter it in this years songwriting contest so taking my time.     

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Re: Breakthrough

Heres me singing Breakthrough for all that are interested and how it sounds.
Listen to Breakthrough by Ctech on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/f1vtu     

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Re: Breakthrough

Ctech you have a real good singing voice and passion in it come through real good. Great song with the singing and musical arrangement bang on. It is a song that I think works well in this modern era and I could imagine my nieces would love it. It has the potential to win song competitions and awards.