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Topic: RAGE

This is not finished.
Exploring the Jekyll & Hyde side of personalities.  inspired by:divorice, BLM, Stupidity, and the songs by FFDP, and Kiss (2 sides of the coin).   Its still in work. but this came out in 10 min.

Standing At the gate,
Should I participate?
A crowd full of hate
Wound up in lies, yet no one tries!


Which way do I go?
I am troubled so.
You see the anger and distrust,
The ceiling is about to bust.


Im standing at the gate,
I feel the anger and the heat.
Staying calm on the outside,
My fire burns, and yet I hide.

Dare me to stand in the path!
Hear me now as I spew my wrath!
You never know it to meet me,
Its that side you are lucky to never see!

I love my kids and I love life,
Yet the monster lurks inside
You never know he is there
I look like I just don’t care.

Next thing you know,
The button is pushed,
Someone got the cut in
The ambush begins.

Dare me to stand in the path!
Hear me now as I spew my wrath!
You never know it to meet me,
Its that side you are lucky to never see!

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)
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Re: RAGE

Beamer,

I think you must have wrotten this about one of my good friends - it describes him pretty well.
Cool calm and collected until he reaches a certain point, then watch out.


Time Bomb might be a good title.

Sounds like something is imminent is always just around the corner.


Good work

Jim     

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

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Re: RAGE

Beamer,

I think you must have wrotten this about one of my good friends - it describes him pretty well.
Cool calm and collected until he reaches a certain point, then watch out.


Time Bomb might be a good title.

Sounds like something is imminent is always just around the corner.


Good work

Jim     

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke
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Re: RAGE

I see you posted this last year? It is full of rage you describe it well. I suggest you keep it in check for your shredding...is that the right term? Woe betide anyone that is standing in you way when the monster erupts!     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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5 Reply by Peatle Jville (edited by Peatle Jville 2021-04-01 10:06:38)

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Re: RAGE

A perfect song about  a person with a scary Elephant in the room inside their head erupting once their wound up and ready to rampage. But then again I see the side that stays hidden a volcano that can't quiet erupt. Is that a pressure cooker about to  explode or one about to gently let out its steam.????????? A gem of a song  be interested to hear what comes next Beamer. So far the first ten minutes writing it have been used well.