Topic: a winters morn

Doth dawn break ever silent over loose and falling stones.
The mountains white capped, majestic.
Greet the new day, reflecting snow.
In the low lands, shadows creeping, hear the chorus of the dawn.
Sheep lift their sleepy heads, humans stretch and yawn.
Grass is white and frosty.
Toes are warm and toasty.
This home is cold so light the fire.
The kettle on the boil.

Who brings the morning paper?
The news for all to read.
The baker boy that rides his bike, over hills and brooks alike.
The old man stirs his morning cup.
The heat that steams his specks.
The candle that was company.
Has burnt itself right out.

The cows that now need milking.
The hay that must be spread.
The eggs must be collected.
The household must be fed.
The day starts later every day.
And every day  it's colder.
It's harder to get out of bed.
Upon a winters morn. 

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Re: a winters morn

Quite a nice piece of literature there Sir Phill !!     

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wow thats something special,great piece of writing.     

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How out thou Phill. I love the way you wrote this.  Well written in a ye old style.   I can hear in it my head been spoken by someone with a  Shakespearian type voice.

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TIGLJK wrote:

Quite a nice piece of literature there Sir Phill !!

i don't know why it came out like that, it was early in the morning, and it was quite frosty and toasty in bed.     

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thank you Brian, i do try, in fact Ann tells me i'm very trying...?     

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Peatle Jville wrote:

How out thou Phill. I love the way you wrote this.  Well written in a ye old style.   I can hear in it my head been spoken by someone with a  Shakespearian type voice.

you may have noticed that it's only airy-fairy in the first verse which i wrote early morning (about 10 o'clock). second and third verse arrived about twelve hours later, so they aren't so floral or Shakespearean.
as for a voice you can choose between Richard Burton or Peter Sellers, oh no you cant as they're both no longer with us... drat     

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Only someone from The Land of Song could have put those words together. It just sounds so Welsh. Great stuff Phill.     

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Phill Williams wrote:

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you may have noticed that it's only airy-fairy in the first verse which i wrote early morning (about 10 o'clock). second and third verse arrived about twelve hours later, so they aren't so floral or Shakespearean.
as for a voice you can choose between Richard Burton or Peter Sellers, oh no you cant as they're both no longer with us... drat

Phil, I use to love hearing Peter Sellers reciting the lyrics to the Beatles Hard Days Night  in a Shakespearian manner.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PLjA331K4YI

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Believe it or not I used to do the Peter Sellers version when I did my comedy slot, many years ago. Funnily enough it was him I was thinking of when you mentioned reciting the poem!     

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keepitreal wrote:

Only someone from The Land of Song could have put those words together. It just sounds so Welsh. Great stuff Phill.

Thanks for reading and commenting keepitreal. Believe me it's always much appreciated when other members can be bothered to look and comment.     

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