1 (edited by beamer 2018-10-28 23:20:55)

Topic: SHADOWS

Went to the tool box to find a zip tie,  seems they wanted to hide.
Alone in one of the doors,  the manila envelope lay,
Peaked inside to see what old stories would say.

I see two old poems, written back in the better days
I read them now and I decide to replay,
minus some stuff and add something new to say

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Staring into darkness, my mind sitting and waiting
For something to appear.
The shadow comes in line, a silhouette,
It grabs my mind.

Eyes follow after, I must catch her.
She is leading me on a chase,
a mystery that’s out of place
Went to the tool box to find a zip tie,  seems they wanted to hide.
Alone in one of the doors,  the manila envelope lay,
Peaked inside to see what old stories would say.

I see two old poems, written back in the better days
I read them now and I decide to replay,
minus some stuff and add something new to say

Staring into darkness, my mind sitting and waiting
For something to appear.
The shadow comes in line, a silhouette,
It grabs my mind. 

Eyes follow after, I must catch her.
She is leading me on a chase,
Like a page from literature,
a mystery that’s out of place.

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

Re: SHADOWS

Beamer you have a great way of putting words together .     

Re: SHADOWS

Somehow that double copied but in reading it the repeat works.     

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

Re: SHADOWS

Fortunate happenstance, all the great Discovery's come about by accident.
I like the way you've moved on to recording what you see. You are indeed very talented.     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: SHADOWS

Great work, Beamer ... you do have a real knack for tying seemingly unrelated images together, to form a seamless message.