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Topic: What and Whatnots

What & What Nots
D A G   F G

I don’t know what I can do,
I don’t know what I can say,
I don’t know what I can do, 
All I know is I LOVE YOU

Over the years we fought a lot,
Told each other what and what not.
Over the years we fought a lot,
Told each other what and what not’s.

Now I’m here and I feel alone
You don’t love me and all is unknown
All these things we’ve said and done,
Shooting at each other like a bullet from a gun.

I don’t know what I can do,
I don’t know what I can say,
I don’t know what I can do, 
all I know is I LOVE YOU

G to F to G to F and something or another

Over and over and over again
I’m going to say it till you let me in.
Over and over and over again
I’m going to say it till you let me in.

I chased you off to the arms of another,
I can’t even call my mother,
Chased you off to the arms of another
OH G*%^&%^&!!
HIT ME BROTHER!

I don’t know what I can do,
I don’t know what I can say,
I don’t know what I can do, 
all I know is I LOVE YOU

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)
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Re: What and Whatnots

beamer, well written and I can see this as a really good song.  Sorry your going through the valley presently.  I have read your poems too.  Something I heard once was this ....... no matter how deep, how long,  how dark the valley you  go through, the main thing is to keep going through it, don't stop, keep going and eventually you will come out the other side. 

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3 Reply by Classical Guitar (edited by Classical Guitar 2018-08-31 13:37:55)

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Re: What and Whatnots

I am sorry for what what thus implys as nicely written as it is. As R.E.M said in song  "everybody hurts some time".

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.
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Re: What and Whatnots

Jan and CG,

Thank you for your kind words.Yes this sucks.  I am just glad I know how to write and express this oppressive weight.

CG, and some hurt deeper and harder than others.

Jan, I will make it through the valley, with or without her.  I feel like crap, but I will survive. I will be a better person.  I will keep writing.

As the song in the original point break goes I WILL NOT FALL https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_JlZ7tsygA 

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)
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Re: What and Whatnots

My Vid of me performing this song also

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fdkGZBtWKi8     

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Re: What and Whatnots

I saw a comment about the distortion on YT, but I'm surprised there's not more.  I could hear this with a neat drum beat and some heavy bass.  Sorry the stuff's happening to make the feels, but the song's good.     

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7 Reply by Peatle Jville (edited by Peatle Jville 2018-09-22 23:04:36)

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Re: What and Whatnots

Beamer it hard when your going through a valley that your going through and  I know you wiil get through it.  I have been down there in the past and eventually after a hard  climb got  out and found  my good place with my  now good darling and love  Maree.     Your lyrics tell a story from my past a very good song I have left a comment on YT.

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Re: What and Whatnots

cool