Scott,
Please post lyrics when you can, please. I have a feeling they'll describe what you mentioned in the other thread. I am having trouble with my hearing right now and have lost my "in the ear" hearing aid, so I can't give your tune the "listen" it needs.
One thing (and I'm sure you already know this from me having read some of your prose): writing is cathartic. Before I got so busy with probs in my personal life, I used to take time as often as possible and just sit, think and write. I'm glad to see you're doing the same, my friend.
Omar Khayyam wrote, "The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ,
Moves on: nor all they Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line
Nor all thy Tears wash out a Word of it."
Keep writing and singing them, my brother!
Bill
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