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Topic: Don't let me go

My try at a pop song. Not brilliant but thought
I'd post anyway. I recorded a take late morning
Which Ill tag on the end.
I don't do it any justice Though.my voice
try's to go high at the end Haha!

Don’t let me go
Verse 1
Fmaj7                          Em7
If you knew how to love
                                      Am
You wouldn’t walk away from me
Fmaj7                          Em7
If you knew how to love
                          Am
You would be true
Fmaj7                          Em7
If you knew how to love
                                              Am
You would stay here and care for me
           Fmaj7                       Em7            Am
Then I would not feel so Empty and abused

Verse 2
Fmaj7                          Em7
If you knew how to love
                                         Am
You wouldn’t make me cry
Fmaj7                          Em7
If you knew how to love
                                        Am
You wouldn’t need to lie
Fmaj7                        Em7           
If you knew how to love
                                       Am
You would give your world to me
        Fmaj7                            Em7                Am
And I wouldn’t be on my knees begging you

Chorus
Dm7        Gm7 Am   Am7       
     Don’t let me go, I still want your love
Dm7        Gm7 Am   Am7       
     Don’t let me go, I still need your love
Dm7        Gm7 Am       
     Don’t let me go
          Fmaj7                  Em7                 Am
Cos I can’t go back to living without you.

Repeat Verse 1

Repeat Chorus
         Fmaj7                        Em7            Am
No I can’t go back to living without you.

© Trevor Scrivens 16/01/2018

https://soundcloud.com/user-415450650/dont-let-me-go

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Re: Don't let me go

You have a good pop voice. I think your strength are more those  songs that provoke thought.

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Re: Don't let me go

Thanks Peatle Jville I think you are right when I write from something real it comes out better, when not its sometimes  a bit confusing.

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4 Reply by easybeat (edited by easybeat 2018-01-18 04:51:17)

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Re: Don't let me go

Ctech
this is a good song well done.
Peatle & i agree on lots of stuff but not this, thought provoking songs are a lot easier
to write.I think love songs are the next easiest, it`s hard to find a new angle
and new thought/words that haven`t been done a million times.
But you did good on this one,but not your best in originality word wise.
You`ve done lots better!( personal opinion)

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5 Reply by ctech (edited by ctech 2018-01-19 12:09:01)

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Re: Don't let me go

Cheers easy beat.  True its not my best I just thought I did post anyways. As to my thought prevoking songs. I'll have to be more careful how I say it. That's why Open your eyes has been taken down to be respectful to other users, coming across as a bit racist the word used as a marxist weapon to stifle debate ,but I was looking at it from the angle of true events no race.
Trevor

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