• From: derbyshire
  • Registered: 2007-05-17
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Topic: pictures in the sky

i see pictures in the sky,
as the clouds roll on by,
then i think of you,
sitting up there on high.

chorus
angels of love,
one day we will come,
shining in the night,
as we sit by your side.

the day turns to night,
and the stars are shining bright,
i can see our guardian angel,
watching over us in flight.

chorus
angels of love,
one day we will come,
shining in the night,
as we sit by your side.

the night turns to day,
the sun lights our way,
in the clouds i see your image,
guiding your family as we work and play.

chorus
angels of love,
one day we will come,
shining in the night,
as we sit by your side.

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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2 Reply by Peatle Jville (edited by Peatle Jville 2017-08-20 00:59:41)

  • Registered: 2015-07-31
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Re: pictures in the sky

Daddycool I love your poem you should turn it into a song.
In every cloud is an angel's face.
They are there if you look.
I remember people telling me as a kid.
Now as an adult when I look  at clouds brushed onto blue skies.
I see many  differant images that they paint into my mind.
I feel  there is something  providing   protection  over  me..
Maybe that is why they say every cloud has a silver lining.
No matter how bad life can be at times.
Clouds even threatening storm clouds must eventually give way to sunlight and growth.

  • From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
  • Posts: 5,704

Re: pictures in the sky

Hello Robert, nice to hear from you again.

You've written your poem out like a song so I'm guessing it's a song that's not quite finished yet? Just the chords to go. Great sentiment and a great poem about angels and loving someone enough to know their being watched over.

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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  • From: Nova Scotia, Canada
  • Registered: 2013-01-20
  • Posts: 4,083

Re: pictures in the sky

Great work, DC ...

Really gives a person a sense of inner calm. I see by the number of posts you've been an active Chordian for a long time ... good to meet you!

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Re: pictures in the sky

dc
love it
nicely put together.....
lets hear a recorded version

JIm

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

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  • From: Virginia, USA
  • Registered: 2016-02-07
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Re: pictures in the sky

I enjoyed poem /song and it shows some very good writing. You said a lot with each verse. Well done.

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.