1 Topic by Peatle Jville (edited by Peatle Jville 2017-07-12 02:58:24)

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Topic: As Long As Love Can Be

Looking at Tenement Funster's excellent poem Defying Gravity reminded me of this poem I  wrote a while back about my wife Maree and I. I tried to make it a song I couldnt get it to work.  I found it and put it up on soundcloud to see  if anyone can make it work as a song. I have attached the link if you want to have a listen and the words below.
   https://soundcloud.com/eatleville/seaside-reflection


                                                                 As Long As Love Can Be

We love each other eternally as long as love can be,
We love each other eternally as long as love can be,
Come dance with me my darling tonight.
Down by the sea and moonlight.
Barefooted on the sand.
We'll sing songs from when we were young many years ago.
Your the Angel that changed my life.
Your the Angel that made me what I am today.
Come waltz with me under moonlight.
Our love is eternally as long as love can be.
Our love is eternally as long as love can be.
The stars in the sky not a cloud to be seen.
The ocean as still as can be.
Just you and me barefoot by the sea,
Come waltz with me my darling we'll sing songs from old.
Just like we were all those years ago my Princess of my life.
Our love is eternally.
Our love is eternally.
As long as love can be.
Our love is eternally.
As long as love can be.
You and me my darling happy as can be,
When I look at you in my eyes.
My darling your still the young girl that I knew back then.
Our love is eternally.
As long as love can be.
Our love is eternally.
As long as love can be.

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Re: As Long As Love Can Be

Very good peatle.i enjoyed the chorus(yeah i`m a real chorus guy).
the two voices & guitar.you should put more of your words on Chordie.
i know you struggle a wee bit with vocal( i know the feeling) but your words can`t be faulted.
But i enjoy your vocal delivery,it truly is original & thats what it`s all about.
bring it on baby!!!!

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Re: As Long As Love Can Be

Thank you Easy Beat

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Re: As Long As Love Can Be

Well done Peatle, had a listen, good to hear your wife joining in with you on one of your songs.  Some really good lyrics in there and i like how your guitar plays along with this song smile

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5 Reply by Peatle Jville (edited by Peatle Jville 2017-07-13 07:37:25)

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Thank you Jandal I had that song sitting there for a while I wasn't happy with my voice and was  originally going to do it with piano. Unfortunately my health got in the way before I could figure a piano version. As I play by feel it means I am not that good at writing down music.. I like it when Maree has a go at one of my songs but it doesnt happen often.. I was hoping she would play piano for me on it but she thought my guitar was all it needed. When I saw Tenement Funster poem Defying Gravity it made remember it. I thought  I should at least put it up in the hope someone else might want to have a go at it.




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– Lao Tzu

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Re: As Long As Love Can Be

Beautiful sentiments. I wish I could get Ann to sing with me.....

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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Re: As Long As Love Can Be

Thank you Phill .

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Re: As Long As Love Can Be

Beautiful imagery here, Peatle ... both vivid & tender.

"Come dance with me my darling tonight
Down by the sea and moonlight
Barefooted on the sand"

This is really, really good!

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Re: As Long As Love Can Be

Thank  you Tenement Funster.

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Re: As Long As Love Can Be

Peatle Jville thank you for sharing your poem.  After reading it I had some thoughts that some of the poems and original songs can mean something entirely different to each menber reading it. That is good if it makes us think and also each members experiences are different and sometimes that can change a meaning too.

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.

11 Reply by Peatle Jville (edited by Peatle Jville 2017-07-15 04:01:17)

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Re: As Long As Love Can Be

C G That is a good thing about songs ,poetry and art is we can all put our perspective on it. A  song can be as  sad as the  listener or a memory that brings a tear of joy.
The Question is not what we are looking at, it is what we see.


A flower is a weed seen through joyful eyes.
- Jonathan Lockwood Huie

In a rapidly ascending balloon were two men.
One watched the earth getting farther and farther away.
One watched the stars getting nearer and nearer.
~George Jean Nathan, "Viewpoint," A Book Without a Title, 1918


“Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.”
― Lao Tzu

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Re: As Long As Love Can Be

Peatle

Those are great quotes on perspective... thanks for the info
I'm sure to use them in my 8th grade class this coming year!

Jim

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
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Cheers TIG