• beamer
  • beamer
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Topic: Crack

Lyrics in work, this hit me this morning watching interviews with Santana and Bob Wier. (I love AXiS TV) *edited to fit rules

To far to the right, to far to the left
Stand on the crack,
They break your *_______ back

Scared of the dark
Your heart accepts or rejects
Not all that is dark takes you to hell
Many loves crafted in that wishing well.

Wrong or right, It’s a daily fight
Trying to be you without becoming them,
Stand on the crack,
They break your *_______  back

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)
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Re: Crack

Beamer

very good now, but has so much potential...great start to what will be a terrific poem/ song.
nice one

Jim

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Re: Crack

More than a bit of angst there, Beamer ... but I really like it.