1 (edited by TIGLJK 2017-04-02 11:48:16)

Topic: Last Time

I cannot tell you how hard this was to write.    I have walked away from this about 10 times..... but I think i have finally finished it.  (It's a bit long, but I don't really care  smile  )

For those  who are older and have seen their kids grow up - I think it may hit home. For those who still have children (or Grandchildren) in their home... I hope it rings true for you.    (I hope you like it. smile

[song]

{t:  Last Time}

[G]We all take for granted our priceless time upon this earth
seems we [C] get too busy,  and  forget  what it's[G]  worth
[G] we expect precious moments, each day like the day before,
but when we [D]learn it's  the last time, it leaves us [C] cryin' out  for [G]more

Chorus 1

Oh,  things like
[D]singing to your baby when its [C] time for them to [G]nap
or [D]reading them their favorite book ,while [C] sitting on your [G]lap
[C] marking up the kitchen  wall , to [G] see how much they've grown
or [D] sitting on their bed at night,  cuz it's  [C]too dark to be [G]alone

yeah [G]there's a last time for everything, but you hardly  know when
things you've[C] done a hundred times before, but will [G]never do again
see [G] tomorrow changes everything , it   always comes too  fast
and those [D]yesterdays, they fade away,  how I [C]wish that  they would [G] last

Chorus 2

Oh things like
[D] putting bubbles in bath water, and [C]helping to tie their [G]shoes
[D]Singing wheels on the bus,  and [C] counting two  by [G] two
[C]Sitting on the 'ol  front porch [G]  trying to name the stars
And [D]playing tag or hide n' seek, building[C] snowmen in the[G] yard


[G] tomorrow isn't  promised , who knows what the future holds
Oh those [C] winds of change are blowing, with  di[G]rection seldom known
those [G]loving times  together, may  never come again
Today [D]might be your last chance, since [C] only  God knows [G] when

Chorus 3

Oh  things like
[D] Laughing  at a silly joke, catching  [C] fireflies at [G]night
Or [D]campfires with a guitar, singing [C] songs that sound just [G]right
[C]Telling little secrets  making [G] sand  castles at the shore
Or [D]trying to  be the last to say "I [C] love you even [G]more"

[G]be sure to say all the  words,   you’ve  always hoped  to say
if to[C] morrow never comes, have  no re[G]grets about today.
The next [G]shared moment   may be the last that you get
so make it [D] really something special, one   you [C]never will for[G]get

Chorus 4

just like
[D]sharing an ice cream cone , or [C] playing make be[G]lieve
[D]Running through a sprinkler , or [C]jumping through some [G]leaves
[C]Walking barefoot in the grass , see  an [G] angel  on a cloud
Putting  [D] band aids on  little scrapes, and [C] laughing really [G] loud

yeah [G]there's a last time for everything, but you hardly ever know when
things you've [C] done a hundred times before, but will [G]never do again
see [G] tomorrow changes everything ,and  it  always comes too  fast
and those [D]yesterdays, they fade away,  how I [C]wish that  they would [G]last
those [D]yesterdays, they fade away,  how I [C]wish that  they would [G]last
those [D]yesterdays, they fade away,  how I [C]wish I could  make them [G]last  (fade out )

[song/]

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: Last Time

Glad you didn't quit. A great song. A lot of thought and emotion in these lyrics. You painted a very vivid picture of family life. I love original songs. Sometimes the real jewels you write are the hardest. Songs like this one keep calling you back. Great job on this one.

Re: Last Time

Haven't had chance to play this through yet, but will a,s,a,p. Some great lines in there, really well thought out. Just one thing a thick old Englishman doesn't understand. What are smores?

Thick as two short planks

4 (edited by TIGLJK 2017-04-01 13:03:52)

Re: Last Time

S'mores are Graham crackers with roasted marshmallows and dark chocolate pieces melted in between. A campfire standard  for American kids
I ended up re writing this and took that part out anyways. smile    You can see above  I revised this a bit after I played it through a bunch of times. (Some lyrical changes)

Thanks for the comments

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: Last Time

I have revised the lyrics somewhat.  Here is a link to this song on my songbook where it is in CHOPRO format - easier to see and play.

http://www.chordie.com/chord.pere/?url= … ranspose=0

I will attempt to put a new recording out on soundcloud soon.  I tried to play it faster and shorten the time, but it just can't be done (at least by me)  and still get the emotional effect. Sorry -it's just a longer song. smile

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: Last Time

I just put up a revised version on soundcloud- here is the link

https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/last-time



Apologies to all regarding the singing smile

Jim

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: Last Time

TIGLJK wrote:

I just put up a revised version on soundcloud- here is the link

https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/last-time



Apologies to all regarding the singing smile

Jim

You are a good singer, and you do take time to post them. Thank you for doing that.

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.

Re: Last Time

My first baby turns 21 today.  I must say, your lyrics hit right in the feels as usual!  Nicely written, Jim.

Art and beauty are in the eyes of the beholder.
What constitutes excellent music is in the ears of the listener.

Re: Last Time

My baby is 24 years old and yep this song definitely hits the `feelings` button.  Well done Tig.

Laugh Lots ... Forgive Much ...  Love one another     smile
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