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Topic: Treasure

Sorry I haven’t been reviewing anyone else’s songs much. Work is a little busy right now. Here’s one I started the other day and finished tonight. Another sappy love ballad inspired by my wife. What can I say other than I am way spoiled. I hope you all like it. I will try and make time soon.

Treasure By Jeff Gilpin


August 13th, 2007




Intro


[Em] [G] [D] [A] [C] [C7]




Verse 1


[Em]If you come to me


I’ll [G]show you things you’ve [D]never seen


[Em]If you come to me


[G]I’ll fulfill your [D]wildest dream


[Em]If you come to me


[G]I will treasure [D]you


I [A]will


Yes I [C]will




Verse 2


[Em]If you stay with me


We’ll [G]live our life with[D]out a care


[Em]If you stay with me


More [G]happiness we’d [D]have to share


[Em]If you stay with me


[G]I will treasure [D]you


I [A]will


Yes I [C]will




Chorus


[G]I will [D]treasure [A]you


[G]I will [D]treasure [A]you


[G]I will [D]treasure [A]you


I [C]will



Yes I [Em]will




Verse 3


[Em]Live your life with me


[G]We will stay for[D]ever young


[Em]Live your life with me


Keep [G]on the journey [D]we’ve begun


[Em]Live your life with me


And [G]I will treasure [D]you


I [A]will


Yes I [C]well




Verse 4


[Em]When we’re old and grey


[G]I will still feel [D]just the same


[Em]When we’re old and grey


As [G]when I saw you [D]that first day


[Em]When we’re old and grey


[G]I will treasure [D]you


I[A] will


Yes I [C]will




Chorus


[G]I will [D]treasure [A]you


[G]I will [D]treasure[A] you


[G]I will [D]treasure [A]you


I [C]will


Yes I [Em7]will



J  E  T  S
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Re: Treasure

Hi jeff
A nice love song.
Lasting love found is a thing to be treasured for ever.

Regards

Ark

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Re: Treasure

Nice song. Nice flow of chords, and I felt they worked well with the lyrics.

Dylan.

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Re: Treasure

aw thats nice. have you sung it to her yet?

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Re: Treasure

Jets!,
Ive told you this before! you definitely know how to treat and  love a woman!  But more importantly not afraid to tell her and everyone else.   Good Man, Your Simply the Best!

Old Doll.

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Re: Treasure

Hey Ark and Dylan - Thanks - I've been trying to resist the urge to over word/chord the songs and I think it worked out here. KISS principle at it's finest!
Last Reb - Thanks - I haven't sung it to her yet but I will in a minute
Old Doll - Thank you very much. I try and make up for how she spoils me by spoiling her with songs. I am lucky though.

J  E  T  S
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