1 (edited by Strummerboy Bill 2016-05-11 01:40:45)

Topic: Want To Get "Silly" With Me

One of my nicknames for Dondra is "Little Miss Ma'am"

It always makes her smile when I use it and I alternate it (in mock frustration) with the phrase "Well, all right then,  "Little Miss Ippity- Pippity!" This also makes her smile.

Okay so right now this is a poem, but I would like this to turn into a silly song in the key of G, going to D and then D7.

The chorus? Don't know yet. After I got through writing, I got a real case of "LOW SELF-STEAM"  (get it? smile smile wink ) and I just haven't been able to continue it yet.

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My Little Miss Ma'am

My little Miss Ma'am (A)
That's what you am     (A)
And everyone who knows us  (B)
They understand   (A)
Why I love you so  (C)   
Why I'll never go     (C)
Your wish is my command (A)

From she who must be obeyed (A)
I'll never stray (A)
And right by you, that's my place (C)
My precious girl with the pretty face (C)
My love for you will never fade (A)


Chorus:

My Little Miss Ma'am (A)
That's what you am  (A)
And everyone who knows us (B)
Will understand (A)

Just a silly tune (A)
By a silly goon  (A)
And everyone who knows me (B)
Knows I'm just an old baboon (A)

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I went ahead and marked the meter in case this needs to be corrected.

Thanks for any help!

Your friend

Bill

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Re: Want To Get "Silly" With Me

Just a silly tune
from a strummer boy named Bill
and anyone who knows me
knows how much I love you
and that I always will.

Sorry Bill I'm on my lunch break at work and this just popped into my head.

Thick as two short planks

Re: Want To Get "Silly" With Me

That's GOTTA go in there somewhere, keep! smile

The chorus, maybe?

I'll work on it.

Thanks very much, my friend!

Bill

Epiphone Les Paul Studio
Fender GDO300 Orchestral - a gift from Amy & Jim
Rogue Beatle Bass
Journal: www.wheretobud.blogspot. com

Re: Want To Get "Silly" With Me

Bill,  I  love what you have done with this and I am looking forward to hearing it as a song.
........... Oh can you come train my husband on how to be obey and my wish to be his command  wink

Laugh Lots ... Forgive Much ...  Love one another     smile
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Re: Want To Get "Silly" With Me

Oh, I think he already has that trait, Jan. smile

Some of us just don't show it as readily.

Bill

Epiphone Les Paul Studio
Fender GDO300 Orchestral - a gift from Amy & Jim
Rogue Beatle Bass
Journal: www.wheretobud.blogspot. com