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Topic: Your world is falling down

I haven't posted on here since 2009 but thought I would post as started writing again

Capo 3 fret

Your world is falling down.                                                   

Verse 1
Am
My minds made up,
Fmaj7/C
I'm not backing down,
G                                     E
I feel moody, but, my feet are on the ground,
Am
You’re out of touch,
Fmaj7/C
Your mind is weak,
G
My god! You sound so stupid,
E                          E7 
Every time you speak,       

Chorus
Am                                                       C
And I don’t care, for what, you are saying,
G                                                   E
Don’t tell me that I don’t understand
Am                                        C
There’s no use, in you explaining, now
Am                   E         Am
Your world is falling down....

Verse 2
Am
I’m a fighting man,
Fmaj7/C
I see through your lies,
G                                                 E
Yes I may be wounded, but I have the will to survive.
Am
I want a happy home,
Fmaj7/C
Furnished with love,
G
A beautiful wife and children,
E                                             E7                                     
If the gods bless me from above,       

Repeat chorus.

Am                            E          Am
Now Your world is falling down....
Am                            E          Am
Now your world is falling down....         
                       
©Copyright 03/05/2016 Trevor Scrivens

https://soundcloud.com/trevor-scrivens/ … lling-down

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Re: Your world is falling down

Hi there, some angry lyrics in there. Haven't had chance to play it through yet but will do a, s, a, p. Thanks for posting.

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3 Reply by ctech (edited by ctech 2016-05-06 19:51:50)

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Re: Your world is falling down

Thanks. Just something in tune with the times and bit different for me. As my other songs posted on here are mostly love songs.

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Re: Your world is falling down

Gidday ctech
great to have another writer putting songs here.
more please!

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Re: Your world is falling down

Hey that is one very determined song. Goood use of minor chords and interesting lyrics.

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Re: Your world is falling down

CTech

I agree with K.I.R, it sounds like there's some anger in there.  When you get people to agree on the message of your lyric, I think you can say mission accomplished!  Well done.

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Re: Your world is falling down

Hi Ctec, long time no see. Welcome back to the fold. I agree with all the above, nice chords and great lyrics. Well done thanks for sharing.

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Re: Your world is falling down

Hi phill,Yeah had a long break,HaHa! Thanks to all who commented I uploaded a rough recording of the song,Take it easy on me first time I tried to sing its bit here and there,but I'm sure you will get where I'm coming from.  If anyone wants a listen. : ) https://soundcloud.com/trevor-scrivens/ … lling-down

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Re: Your world is falling down

Gidday Trev
Just left a comment on soundcloud (rough as )

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Cheers mate glad you liked it. smile

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Re: Your world is falling down

I dont think I have met you on here yet, but I would like to hear you singing it. I can sorta get it, but not hearing how you mean for it to come across.  Welcome back!

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Re: Your world is falling down

Quite catchy number. smile
Well done.

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Re: Your world is falling down

Cool song I too would like to hear how you sing it.Ive played it through and it gos along nicely

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I've now put the link to me singing this song under the lyrics. For all who want to listen and comment. smile

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