You are not logged in. Please login or register.
Guitar chord forum - chordie → Songwriting → Can us song qriters try this??
Ok, everyone writes one line, whatever pops into your mind, stick it in and we'll see what mind of a song we come up with.
If it works, great if not then well whatever lol
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the sky........
(PS I made a typo lol using a new laptop!!)
Great idea scrimmy82 - it'll work! James
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the sky
I could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes ........
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the sky
I could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
The night was drawing in and the air filled the sky
I could see forever sparkling deep with in her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing hearts
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the skyI
could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing hearts
Touch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the skyI
could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing hearts
Touch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
The smell of your skin made me think of the time...
Touch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
the smell of your skin made me think of the time
First time holding you to be mine all mine
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the skyI
could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing hearts
Touch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
The smell of your skin made me think of the time
First time holding you to be mine all mine
As the flash of a shooting start lit up the night
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the skyI
could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing hearts
Touch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
The smell of your skin made me think of the time
First time holding you to be mine all mine
As the flash of a shooting start lit up the night
Something started stirring beyond the eerie light
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the skyI
could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing hearts
Touch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
The smell of your skin made me think of the time
First time holding you to be mine all mine
As the flash of a shooting start lit up the night
Something started stirring beyond the eerie light
We felt it both deep inside the marrow of our bones
D C
As the flash of a shooting star,lit up the sky.
D G A D
the silver moon was just comming into site.
D C
The nite was so calm, the stars up above.
D G A D
What a place to be,with the one I love.
Just foolin with some chords for this neat little tune.
Badeye.
opps, Sorry James I got your lines wrong. As Old Doll say's
a senior moment.This is a neat thread.
Badeye/
No problem, badeye. I was dithering around trying to add a line, and by the time I had posted the next line scrimmy82 had already posted - so I just went back and put in the next line.
Just add whatever you want. The chords you put would be dandy . . . seems like we need either a chorus or a bridge of some sort.
It's great so far - needs more fingers in the pot!
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the sky
I could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing heartsTouch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
The smell of your skin made me think of the time
First time holding you to be mine all mineAs the flash of a shooting start lit up the night
Something started stirring beyond the eerie light
We felt it both deep inside the marrow of our bones
While the wind whistled through the trees in melancholy tones
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the sky
I could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing hearts
Touch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
The smell of your skin made me think of the time
First time holding you to be mine all mine
As the flash of a shooting start lit up the night
Something started stirring beyond the eerie light
We felt it both deep inside the marrow of our bones
While the wind whistled through the trees in melancholy tones
Chorus or Bridge . . .
Dance in the darkness dance still for me . . .
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the sky
I could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing hearts
Touch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
The smell of your skin made me think of the time
First time holding you to be mine all mine
As the flash of a shooting start lit up the night
Something started stirring beyond the eerie light
We felt it both deep inside the marrow of our bones
While the wind whistled through the trees in melancholy tones
Chorus or Bridge . . .
Dance in the darkness dance still for me . . .
Just enfold me in the ecstasy
Chorus or bridge....
Dance in the darkness dance still for me....
just enfold me in the ecstasy
Hold me till the night light dims
Into nothingness and all that is.
The cold night said goodbye warm daylight filled the sky
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the sky
I could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing hearts
Touch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
The smell of your skin made me think of the time
First time holding you to be mine all mine
As the flash of a shooting start lit up the night
Something started stirring beyond the eerie light
We felt it both deep inside the marrow of our bones
While the wind whistled through the trees in melancholy tones
Chorus or Bridge . . .
Dance in the darkness dance still for me . . .
Just enfold me in the ecstasy
Hold me till the night light dims
Into nothingness and all that is.
The cold night said goodbye warm daylight filled the sky
Forever was still sparkling within her sleepy eyes
The night was drawing in and cold air filled the sky
I could see forever sparkling deep within her eyes
Nothing could be clearer as we gazed into the stars
That nothing comes between two people sharing hearts
Touch of your soft hand brushed away your lies
The touch of your lips eased my breaking heart
The smell of your skin made me think of the time
First time holding you to be mine all mine
As the flash of a shooting start lit up the night
Something started stirring beyond the eerie light
We felt it both deep inside the marrow of our bones
While the wind whistled through the trees in melancholy tones
Chorus or Bridge . . .
Dance in the darkness dance still for me . . .
Just enfold me in the ecstasy
Hold me till the night light dims
Into nothingness and all that is.
The cold night said goodbye warm daylight filled the sky
Forever was still sparkling within her sleepy eyes
This is a new day a bright new shining way
And you are the reason that I will forever stay
Looks to me as if our team effort has found an ending? What do we do now?
Scrimmy82, you got this party started - what do you think?
hey guys just foolin who can add bridge chorus etc we gotta see it through to the end.
How about these chords for the bridge/chorus:
[D]Dance in the darkness [C]dance still for [G]me
[D]Just enfold me in the [C]ecsta[G]sy
[D]Hold me till the night [C]light [G]dims
[D]Into nothingness and [C]all that [Em]is.
Looking good guys I like it, now who's going to record it...............Roger?
Guitar chord forum - chordie → Songwriting → Can us song qriters try this??
