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Topic: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

I had this line in my head -  "This time I may be wrong"   played around with the cowboy chords - and this is what I came up with.
Hope you like it.



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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

Your lyrics work pefectly and the chords fit nicely.

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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

here is a quick take on it - it's fun to play --- wish I could freaking sing !

https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/this-time … t-be-wrong

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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

I've always said you were the champion of the great chorus but now I see you're top man with verses too.

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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

Just listened to your  This Time I Maybe Wrong on soundcloud it is a good song your guitar drives it along nicely As a song writer your vocals do the job setting down a good template for someone to cover.

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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

That's what I usually hope for, one of the good players and singers here to do just that. There are many talented people here on Chordie for sure. 
Thanks for the listen smile

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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

Isn't it great how a single line can give genesis to such great work ... nicely done. I thought I was wrong once, but I was mistaken (hyuk).

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good one TIGLJK  I must agree with  Phill  on the verses there all good but that first one is  really is catchy .

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Tenement Funster wrote:

Isn't it great how a single line can give genesis to such great work ... nicely done. I thought I was wrong once, but I was mistaken (hyuk).

i loved that....really made me laugh big_smile

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Thanks  for the indirect suggestion - after I read what you posted I realized the last verse was okay - but didn't really carry the theme as the first verse had.     So I changed the last stanza a bit - I like it better - a little more catchy and in the same moments of the first verse I think-  I hope you like it.

That's what is so great about chordie - man I love this site !

and see...... I was wrong smile

If one of you guys that can really play and sing as opposed to my abilities, want to cover this - I'd love to hear a version smile




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well I would not have suggested changing it but dang if you didn't improve on it.

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well

the new format has left me a bit frustrated

As you can see above - the lyrics and chords to my song got chopped off....
what makes me sad is that the only place i had the edited version was right here ! sad

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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

TIG,  Make a post here. It's Roger's "Bugs"  thread.

http://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=28666

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Re: This Time I May Be Wrong New Song

Thanks Joe

lot of growing pains and lessons learned in the transition

Chordie still is awesome though

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