1 Topic by beamer (edited by beamer 2015-11-29 07:16:53)

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Topic: Dredge of souls

This is one that has been put together after a week or so of late night thoughts.  Spiral note book sat by the bathroom sink. great place to catch late night notes before forgetting them. and on the way to the head is funny enough when I have them.  Seemingly random thoughts that all of the sudden come together.
Here it is.

Dark bags under my eyes
Slammed to the mental edge
A hard man can never cry
My souls mired and dredged.

Crush of will, play to kill
Got a lot of time to fill
Come play with me
Test my skill.

They point their finger
Right at me.
They cant see the other three
Pointing back to thee!

Bombastic, sarcastic, Stay up all night,
Are we going to fight?
Sadistic, hedonistic,
Or are we voyeuristic?

once again,, music needed.

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Re: Dredge of souls

Love it, Beamer ... absolutely love it! Just the right amount of self-loathing and in-your-facedness.

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Re: Dredge of souls

Thank you!  "facedness" Love it! LOLOL that's right up there with "Bada##edness"

Self loathing,, I never saw it that way but yep very fitting description?

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)