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  • Registered: 2008-05-06
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Topic: love in a storm

True love is rare these days, it's so hard to find. When you find your soul mate always keep this in mind.

May the storm be your passion, and the love instilled in your heart.

May the rain and wind bring you more love and may that love never part.

May you find someone to love, a love so dedicated and true. Someone to bond with to make you happy when blue someone to caress you and dry you tears.

May you find someone who you can lean on, someone to take away all your fears.

May it never go away this storm in your heart, and may you always be together, thinking of each other when you're apart. ~fin~

So, thoughts, comments, ideas guys? I don't really have any direction with the melody yet.

Merry Meet
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  • From: Western Oregon,US
  • Registered: 2008-07-22
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Re: love in a storm

Not bad RJ,  You might have to tweak the words a bit when you put it to music.  I'd be interested in hearing what you come up with.

Now the only reason I mention the possibility of change is that music has a timing that is fairly structured, and reading just the words, it's hard to get the feel of the meter.  Language is not as rigidly bound to a set beat, and sometimes you have to trim or lengthen a phrase to get the two to work together.

Good stuff though!

Take Care;
Doug

"what is this quintessence of dust?"  - Shakespeare
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Re: love in a storm

Hey bud! I was playing around with some chords and found that the song would be slow and dragging if I kept the exact wording, so tweaking to fit the melody now. I'll post a vid on youtube and link it when I'm satisfied with everything.

RJ

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  • From: Upstate New York
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Re: love in a storm

Welcome to Chordie rj! I agree with Doug,a little tweak here and there and you have a nice song there. Look forward to the finished version!

  • From: Western Oregon,US
  • Registered: 2008-07-22
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Re: love in a storm

Don't know how deeply you've delved into the forums here on Chordie, but hiding down in the "stickys" in the Recording section is a section referring to the Chordie Members Musical Network.... options for working with more experienced members in getting your original tunes polished.  Kind of a mentoring thing I think, but some folks here have put together some nice music via the network, and it might be worth mentioning.

Haven't seen much action from that corner recently, but I do know that it is still active and is another resource available here on Chordie for aspiring songwriters.

Take Care;
Doug

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Re: love in a storm

hi rj, welcome to chordie. beatiful sentiments, i hope we'll be hearing more, lots more from you.

phill

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  • Registered: 2014-10-09
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Re: love in a storm

Impressive lines and all the best to you.

  • Grah1
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Re: love in a storm

this   has  potential

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  • dino48
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Re: love in a storm

Nice lyrics seems like some Bob Dylan chords would do well for the song.

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  • From: Tooele Ut
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Re: love in a storm

I think It's called phraeology

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Re: love in a storm

I found the Bob Dylan song that matches "Forever Young". is the name of the tune check it out.

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman
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Re: love in a storm

I think It's called phraeology

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Re: love in a storm

I like Love in Storm much.

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