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Topic: `Fingers To The Knockers`Some say ok

`Finger to the knockers`

About my writing song
I`m taking a bit of flak
Some say ok
But others say they crap
So think i`ll stop writing
It`s knocked my con..fi..dence
writing songs   putting out there
Is like walking down main st. naked
a lot of laughing & pointing
particularly at the little bits

so i`ll stay with guitar
just stick to strum
then i won`t be naked
no one laughing at my bum

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Re: `Fingers To The Knockers`Some say ok

Nice one easybeat

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Re: `Fingers To The Knockers`Some say ok

am i to understand you've got a small bum brian?

it's very funny, but i hope you don't mean you're going to stop writing? though you are right, when you put your stuff up in public, it is like walking naked. i hope the people that just read without commenting can understand that all we want is encouragement.

KEEP IT UP.

phill

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Re: `Fingers To The Knockers`Some say ok

Big Bum actually!

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Re: `Fingers To The Knockers`Some say ok

cool I  love  humorous poems

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