1 (edited by easybeat 2014-02-06 18:41:09)

Topic: Money Talks.

I can`t believe i wrote this RAP song? I hate rap!
As i was reading it back i was tapping my hand on the desk
& thought hey that works,so went back & hardened up the lyrics.

Money Talks

All the moneys going out
nothings comin` in
Ain`t nothing unusual
The way it`s always bin
Work so hard
Six days a week
No sign.....   the good life
No sign........relief
All the moneys going out
Nothings comin` in
They say money talks
Well it does ....with a grin
My money talks
All it says is
Bye....Bye...Bye
Bye   Bye   Bye Bye .........sucker

The King Of Audio Torture

Re: Money Talks.

Doesn't have to be a rap. Could be hard rock.

the chordie geordie

Re: Money Talks.

Slow it down and it could be a blues tune with some em,b7 a7 chords in there.

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Re: Money Talks.

Fits  perfectly  as  a blues  song  up to   the  word  grin ,write  some  more verses the  lyrics  are  great

Re: Money Talks.

i also hate rap, which is probably why i felt compelled to put your words to music...it's country style 4:4 beat with a rock feel



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(the bye bye part is repeated as much as you like. verse 2 sounds like the chorus)

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Re: Money Talks.

Rap isn't one of my favorite genres either but mainly because of subject matter.  However, something about breaking a song down to basics (lyrics and a beat) is kind of appealing.

DE

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Re: Money Talks.

I ws going to say country.  Each of us has his own beat.

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Re: Money Talks.

hi easybeat i rapped it but the bye byes dont quite click with me,how about ,goodbye sucker your wallets thin.loved it anyway i get that feeling every month.....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

9 (edited by easybeat 2014-02-09 03:26:13)

Re: Money Talks.

Thanks for ya comments guys,all noted.I`m open to any advise
i can get from you lot.i`m just a strummer so am keen to take on
your comments.
Phill sent me a mp3 of this song that he did.it is brilliant,it gave
me goose bumps.As i`m not much @ singing & playing im rapt
that someone took their time to make something of one of my scribbles.
thanks Phil for ever grateful,  for once words fail me.

brian

The King Of Audio Torture