• From: telford,shropshire, england
  • Registered: 2007-06-20
  • Posts: 20

Topic: Think of Me

Hi all......well i hope this effort will work!!!!lol

this is the first song that i have written and is inspired by a breakdown of a relationship.
                                                                                                 Please leave any feedback as i would love to know what you think good or otherwise (just not too harsh though please)lol





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  • From: Starkville, Mississippi USA
  • Registered: 2006-03-04
  • Posts: 2,069

Re: Think of Me

I like it!  Glad you finally got the song to post.

Hope that the obvious bitterness from the break up is subsiding . . . makes me wonder what the other side of the story might be like!  James

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  • From: telford,shropshire, england
  • Registered: 2007-06-20
  • Posts: 20

Re: Think of Me

thanks james

i wrote i to be kinda both sides of the story,the verse from my partners point of view and the chorus as my reply.
unfortunatly it was myself that slipped up

but after all that happened we have got back together and have been together 12 years in total and scince back together have another beautiful daughter,so there must be atleast another song in there somewhere!!!!!!

thanks again
matt

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  • Registered: 2007-04-03
  • Posts: 3,489

Re: Think of Me

Hi Death and taxes,
I do believe wherever our head energy is on any given day is connected to the person or things we think about! Its the same universal energy!

Love the song!

Slán

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  • From: Almancil, Algarve, Portugal
  • Registered: 2006-09-02
  • Posts: 6,205

Re: Think of Me

Hello Matt,

I know you had problems getting  this song posted but it was well worth the effort. It is a lovely song and it flows nicely.

I am pleased that things worked out for you in the end. Perhaps the song helped or maybe it is a reflection of the past, whatever it is a good song, well done.

Thank you,

Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

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  • From: Hendersonville, NC USA
  • Registered: 2006-03-04
  • Posts: 2,521

Re: Think of Me

Hey Matt, I like it too. That stagger of the ev-er and mem-ory gives it a unique sound (if I'm reading it right) that's very nice and I like how you transition from Am in the first 3 lines to the A at the last line of the chorus. Well done.

J  E  T  S
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  • From: telford,shropshire, england
  • Registered: 2007-06-20
  • Posts: 20

Re: Think of Me

hey thanks for the comments very much appreciated,inspired to write more now!!!!!!!...not too sure thats a good thing though!!lol thanks again guys!!

matt

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