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Topic: when i'm with you

here's a link to a new song that i've put to clipart downloaded from google. i think it's funny. please have a look and share your thoughts.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EmRSrrZbrhk

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2 Reply by Russell_Harding (edited by Russell_Harding 2013-07-31 17:31:11)

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Re: when i'm with you

Phill i really loved the feel and the instumental arrangement vocals also the only suggestion is to tone down the reverb on the vocals  other then that its a great song my friend
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  • dino48
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Re: when i'm with you

I enjoyed your song Phil,sorry we do not have a thumbs up sign so use your imagination.

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Re: when i'm with you

thanks both, i dont know why i set the reverb so high, it sounded good (i thought) on the first vocal track, then i did a second and i couldnt then take it down, and i couldn't be bothered to do it again! lazy i guess.

hi dino, russ's thumb is big enough for the two of you. cheers

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Re: when i'm with you

I agree with Russ - Your vocals are great on their own..I would go light on the reverb if you use it at all. Really enjoyed the instrumentation.

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Re: when i'm with you

I liked it a lot - great rhytym   a feel good song for sure.  Ditto on reverb - but that's old news

Great Job Phil

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Re: when i'm with you

thanks for the feedback and advice guys

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