• From: South Africa
  • Registered: 2012-08-24
  • Posts: 13

Topic: LOOKING BACK

LOOKING BACK

Hurricane – Devastation
Torrid River – Eroded Self

Everest – Missing Rope
Sandy Beach – Dead Survivor

Burdened Clouds – Delayed Labour
Pregnant Dreams – Stillborn

Broken Wings –Hampered Flight
Open Arms – Empty Hands

Naked Spaces – Lost Faces
Crumbled Walls – Shattered Dreams

Fallen Tears – Hope Contained
Narrow Paths – Lost Journey

Open Mind - Misunderstood
Closed Heart – Love Lost

Parched Throat – Poisoned Well
Imminent Sleep – Bed of Nails

Empty Grave – Life Unlived
Black Sky – Extinguished Stars

Blank Tombstone – Life forgotten
Ashes to Ashes – Dust to Dust

Judy Mills

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  • From: Tooele Ut
  • Registered: 2006-03-04
  • Posts: 4,049

Re: LOOKING BACK

I'm trying to make sense of this Judy.  It seems very dark and there is a lot of pain in those short phrasings.

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  • From: Scott County, Virginia, U.S.A.
  • Registered: 2008-03-19
  • Posts: 794

Re: LOOKING BACK

I don't look back, can't stand laughing at myself that much.

Live in the "now" - a contentment of the moment - the past is gone - the future doesn't exist - all we ever really have is now and it's always "now".
  • From: South Africa
  • Registered: 2012-08-24
  • Posts: 13

Re: LOOKING BACK

I find that my poetry is a healing process when dark days loom and I am seem to write the best poignant poems then.

Happy days are best served by me writing articles weekly and thank goodness the dark days are few and far between smile

Thanks guys for the resonses

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