It looks promising.
May I make a suggestion on future vids? Get right to the song, you can make a seperate introductions vidieo. make sure your warmed up and praticed, I noticed a few hesiations in the filming.
Singer needs to have a microphone and needs to SING OUT. I went to a Jewel show and there were 2 female acts b4 her. I had to strain to hear them. They acted like they were afarid to get close to the microphone. I actually fell asleep through half of the show. A ballad can be sung quietly but with power.
Maybe you guys could find a cool looking pub or even a basement/ or a den / room - to shoot your next song. The acoustics of your pratice garage take away from the song. You guys look a little bored also. Stand up. Get some emotion showing.
Im no pro. But if you look at this from a quality standpoint (Im a quality inspector btw) I think people are going to give you a 2.5 second chance and look to the next new vid.
You Tube has a lot of compititon these days. If this is a vidieo for fun, friends and family, Its great. If your promoting yourself,, get creative.
hope this helps. Keep pushing! I may not be the best musician but I have some experieance with people and their reactions to music.
Peace Love and Chicken Fried Stake!
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