• Registered: 2007-06-03
  • Posts: 11

Topic: On your way to Hell

This was the first song I wrote. I've since had it produced. You can listen to the song at the following link http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus … dID=580809 BTW it's not me singing or playing on the track

{t:On your way to Hell}
{st:Rock}
{c:capo on 4th fret}

Song removed from Songwriting forum as per author's request.

  • From: Wilkes, Georgia
  • Registered: 2007-05-08
  • Posts: 66

Re: On your way to Hell

Oh wow!  This is an excellent song!  I am very impressed with the writing in this one tommyboy2.  I played the chords in my head as i read along and i got chills....just an awesome work!

"Fly on Proud Bird, At Last You Are Free"
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  • Registered: 2007-05-22
  • Posts: 86

Re: On your way to Hell

i agree with rooster...this is a very different song from the ones ive read...brilliant
keep writing and composing..:)
saba

love is like a violin, the music may stop now and then but the strings remain forever...
  • From: Almancil, Algarve, Portugal
  • Registered: 2006-09-02
  • Posts: 6,205

Re: On your way to Hell

Hey Tom,

That is quite exceptional especially as it is your first song.

I think it would interest a lot of Chordie members to know how you went about getting it produced. Did you take it to a local band or recording studio or what? And who is performing the song for you, your choice or the producers? I would be fascinated to know the story behind it.

Thank you,

Roger

"Do, or do not; there is no try"

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  • From: Paisley, Scotland
  • Registered: 2006-07-09
  • Posts: 337

Re: On your way to Hell

Love it love it love it! Its got me thinking to Pearl Jam.....Great song!! 11/10 big_smile

All I got, is a red guitar, three chords and the truth

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  • Registered: 2007-06-05
  • Posts: 1

Re: On your way to Hell

tommyboy2 wrote:

This was the first song I wrote. I've since had it produced. You can listen to the song at the following link http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus … dID=580809 BTW it's not me singing or playing on the track

On your way to HellRock


capo on 4th fret




[Am] You left me dying in the street


[C] But it’s funny the people you meet


[Em] When you’re on your way to [Am] Hell


[Am] You left me dying in the street


[C] But it’s funny the people you meet


[Em] When you’re on your way to [Am] Hell




[Am] I met a long haired lover from Liverpool


He said he [C] didn’t mean to do it


But he lost his cool


And [Em] wiped his family out in an after [Am] noon




[Am] I met a Punk who’d lost his Rock


[C] Killed his girl in a hotel block


Then [Em] killed himself


With a needle and dirty [Am] spoon




[Dm] You see there’s no such place as [Am] Purgatory


[Dm] You’re either going up or [Am] down


[E] Oh how I wish that I was [Am] somewhere else


[E] Lord take me back to my hometown


[Am] You left me dying in the street


[C] But it’s funny the people you meet



[Em] When you’re on your way to [Am] Hell


[Am] You left me dying in the street


[C] But it’s funny the people you meet


[Em] When you’re on your way to [Am] Hell


[Am] I met a bully who thought it was cool


To [C] pick on the weak and be real cruel


Til [Em] one of them fought back


With a with a thirty [Am] two


[Am] I met a bunch of kids, who they say


[C] Laughed as they blew their classmates away


They [Em] blamed it on the music


They listened [Am] to


[Dm] You see there’s no such place as [Am] Purgatory


[Dm] You’re either going up or [Am] down


[E] Oh how I wish that I was [Am] somewhere else


[E] Lord take me back to my hometown


[Am] You left me dying in the street


[C] But it’s funny the people you meet


[Em] When you’re on your way to [Am] Hell


[Am] You left me dying in the street


[C] But it’s funny the people you meet


[Em] When you’re on your way to [Am] Hell


[Am] Well I hope you pay for your sins on earth


Cos you [C] sure will pay when you’re down in the dirt


[Em] And your on your way to [Am] Hell


[E] And your on your way to [Am] Hell


wow! that was impressive! :D :D :D

  • From: Ohio
  • Registered: 2006-10-02
  • Posts: 230

Re: On your way to Hell

wow, awesome song, when i first saw it i was like, great he did some highway to hell remix, but its really good, rock on man.

~Kori

If you spend your life judging people, how will you ever have time to love them ♥
  • Registered: 2007-06-03
  • Posts: 11

Re: On your way to Hell

Thank you all for your kind comments. I got the idea for the song when I saw someone reading a book called the 'Five people you meet in Heaven' (I think that's what it's called). I then thought about the people you would meet if you were on your way to Hell.

I had the song produced by a guy called Mike Caro (substudio). He plays all the instruments and produced the song, including vocals for $450 (about £230 in real money LOL). I sent him a rough demo which was recorded straight to PC (with me on vox and guitar, singing and playing very badly). He sent me a couple of rough demos and eventually we got the finished product. This was the first time I ever had a recording produced and I am very pleased with the result. Mike is a nice guy who I came across on a couple of the other boards. I am not sure who the singer is, but he did an awsome job on vox.

Thanks again for all the feedback.

Happy songwriting

Tommyboy2