1 Topic by Lane1777 (edited by Lane1777 2010-12-12 22:14:37)

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Topic: don`t you want a love like that [lyrics]

i couldn`t find a board to say Hi" so i`ll say it here, i`m looking to get a little better with my writing, and get a little help  on some songs i`ve written. hope its ok to comment on other work here. i`m not real touchy, and not looking for a pat on the back, so you are welcome to say anything. didn`t know where to start so i`ll post this work, hope to meet you all. Lane

if youi need sound with this, I can put a roughed out link up.

verse:
  C                 Am   
history has its famous lovers
    F                         G
every girl had her knight in armor.
C                       Am
a Cinderella, or a Cleopatra
F                G
finding love forever after...

chorus:                F
Don`t you want to love like that
  G                           C                  Am
a storybook ending, going down in history.
         F
just a matter-of-fact...G
                           C
don`t you want to love like that.

verse:
C                     Am         
Mary ann, loves Jimmy ray
F                              G
carved a heart in that old oak tree.
C                    Am
They ran off to be together
F                        G
still hand in hand Fifty years later

chorus:                F
Don`t you want to love like that
G                         C                 Am
You and Me baby", running wild being free,
           F
to be a matter-of-fact...G
                           C
don`t you want to love like that.

bridge:
F                      G
Every love is a different story
F                            G
a heart can wait, or love forever...

D                            Bm
little Bobby, and the neighbor Jenni
Em                                              A
they were so in love, and then she moved away.
D                                Bm
whats the chance they never married
Em                                 A
and find each other in the store one day.

chorus:
                           G
Don`t you want to love like that
   A                         D
a storybook ending, romeo chasing Juliet
         G
just a matter-of-fact...A
                           G           D
don`t you want to love like that.

[put the chords on with this, hope i didn`t screw it up to bad...lol]

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Re: don`t you want a love like that [lyrics]

Hi Lane1777
Welcome to Chordie and the song writing section. Thanks for sharing the lyrics of your love song which read real nice.
If you could please include the chords to the song in your post then the it can stay in the songwriting section. There's a sticky at the top of the posts which explain why lyrics alone will be classed as a poem and will be move to that section.
Thanks for your co-operation in advance.
ark

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Re: don`t you want a love like that [lyrics]

sure I will, let me take a look and see how others do it.

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Re: don`t you want a love like that [lyrics]

hi lane 7777,I like the song/poem and the chords seem to fit,could you post a version on you tube so we can hear it?

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman

5 Reply by Lane1777 (edited by Lane1777 2010-12-13 03:11:25)

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Re: don`t you want a love like that [lyrics]

I don`t you tube..lol but I can put a small work recording up on soundclick, don`t expect to much, its really not finished and i`m not the best singer in the world. i can give you the idea i had for the song. i think the bridge in this sucks..but i`m working on it. thank you for taking time to read me.

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9993915

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Re: don`t you want a love like that [lyrics]

I enjoyed your song, Lane. It was fun to play on my guitar. Your soundclick worked just great; you're voice has a mellow, country quality that fits well with the lyrics.

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Re: don`t you want a love like that [lyrics]

Welcome to Chordie Lane,

Thanks for posting the link to your song, I think you have a good voice,it suits your style of playing nicely. smile

I look forwards to the completed version. Let us know if you need help when it comes to formatting your songs.

Cheers

Kenny

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Re: don`t you want a love like that [lyrics]

thank you arkady for the comment and the help.

Hi artless, i`m trying to make the song dancable...lol a little lite, thank you for taking the time to comment.

Hello KAP, so nice to meet you. thank you for the offer, and commenting, i most likely will need it once i break every rule on the site!..lol

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Re: don`t you want a love like that [lyrics]

Lane1777 wrote:

thank you arkady for the comment and the help.

No problem. Well done for getting a sample of the song up so quickly. I had a listen I thought it has a sort of country feel to it.
Sounds like it has potential worth developing..
ark

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Re: don`t you want a love like that [lyrics]

i am country ark, don`t be mad at me..lol i tried to make the song roll a little, i write emotional stuff so much i get in a rut" i don`t think its going to knock any doors down but its ok to have around.