• From: Sweden, Gislaved
  • Registered: 2008-02-17
  • Posts: 5

Topic: "Where is the freedom?"

I guess it's here where pepole post their own songs. And I thought, why not mine?
I've got ackords for this song, I just havn't written them here.

I'm a girl from sweden, 14 years old (My 15th birthday in september)
Please comment, and sorry if there is any wrong spellings. Please let me know. I would love to become a better songwriter!

Straight lines
hold your head up high.
no itching, no pinching.
standing still
you might feel ill.
but tonight it's war time.
and there's nothing else on their minds.

Chorus;
Where is the freedom?
Watching peapole and there's no freedom.
Peapole living under strict orders.
There's no room for freedom.
Were is the freedom?
Brainwashed peapole doesn't have any freedom.
Their minds are all black and cleaned.
There's no time for freedom.
Were is the freedom?

Far away, children marching straight ahead.
Young and old doesn't matter.
They didn't had a chance, chance to get a childhood.
Put down their foots,
Wearing to big boots.
But tonight it's war time.
and there's nothing else on their minds.

Chorus;
Where is the freedom?
Watching peapole and there's no freedom.
Peapole living under strict orders.
There's no room for freedom.
Were is the freedom?
Brainwashed peapole doesn't have any freedom.
Their minds are all black and cleaned.
There's no time for freedom.
Were is the freedom?

They need their freedom.
And somehow, we all know.
We're the only one who can give it back.
What ever we took, we have to give it back.
Let's rise up, we have to do something.
Start movin', stop the fantasy groovin'.
Wake up to the reality.
It's now or ever, actually.

Chorus;
Where is the freedom?
Watching peapole and there's no freedom.
Peapole living under strict orders.
There's no room for freedom.
Were is the freedom?
Brainwashed peapole doesn't have any freedom.
Their minds are all black and cleaned.
There's no time for freedom.
Were is the freedom?

Let's give them their freedom.
______________________________
Please don't steal it. I've written it my self, and I'm very pruod over it.
Love, /Lisa.

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Re: "Where is the freedom?"

Hi ineedmcfly
Welcome to Chordie. That's a great set of lyrics you've done there
Well done to you.  I just noticed your spelling of peapole should be "people"
Like to see the chords your have in mind for your song to though.
Ark

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  • Registered: 2007-05-17
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Re: "Where is the freedom?"

hi ineedmcfly welcome to chordie ,age does'nt matter on here i'm 54 but we're all learning from each other ,it just feels great being able to create something for someone elses pleasure,well done on your song lyrics ,keep at it....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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  • From: Sweden, Gislaved
  • Registered: 2008-02-17
  • Posts: 5

Re: "Where is the freedom?"

arkady wrote:

Hi ineedmcfly
Welcome to Chordie. That's a great set of lyrics you've done there
Well done to you.  I just noticed your spelling of peapole should be "people"
Like to see the chords your have in mind for your song to though.
Ark

okey, thanks! smile
right.. people. i'll change that right away, thanks! smile
yes, i thought I would put them here soon. I'm not really sure about all of the ackords tho..
But I guess I'll work it out, somehow.
and thansk again! smile

  • From: Sweden, Gislaved
  • Registered: 2008-02-17
  • Posts: 5

Re: "Where is the freedom?"

daddycool wrote:

hi ineedmcfly welcome to chordie ,age does'nt matter on here i'm 54 but we're all learning from each other ,it just feels great being able to create something for someone elses pleasure,well done on your song lyrics ,keep at it....stay cool

At first I thought I was a bit young. But I guess you're right. age doesn't matter.
thanks. smile !

  • Registered: 2007-04-03
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Re: "Where is the freedom?"

Fáilte IneedMcfly,

Great lyrics, great insight  for one so young.

I only learned how to nonconform as i got older.  Your song reminded me of this song from many moons ago.

http://www.ocap.ca/songs/littlbox.html   Same message i feel.

Well done, keep up the good work.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !