• From: Wellington New Zealand
  • Registered: 2010-03-24
  • Posts: 1,387

Topic: Help !

ive got this song,but for the life of me i cant seem to put it together.
ive tried a few different progressions/feels/styles but with no good result.
usually when a song comes it comes with all this already there.
if anyone can sort this for me id be thankful.

Drink Driving
drink driving
and in a mess
ive done this
i must confess
when i was a young man
an unthinking fool
the sound of twisted metal
and screams of bloody pain
i can remember
so i wont drink drive again
so now i put
my drinks on a tab
when im drunk
i catch a cab
cause i can remember
so i wont drink drive again 

The King Of Audio Torture
  • From: Perth
  • Registered: 2017-09-27
  • Posts: 1,453

Re: Help !

I'm at work, so don't have a guitar on me - but I'm thinking it would go well with a [C#m] to [E] then down to an [A] and [F#m] with one chord to each of the lines ... I heard it in a blues downbeat style .... let me know if that works for you.

Cheers

Richard     

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  • From: Wellington New Zealand
  • Registered: 2010-03-24
  • Posts: 1,387

Re: Help !

thanks Neo ill give it a try or maybe its just a poem as it only came to me with words only.     

The King Of Audio Torture