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Topic: Wretched Lives Blues Version

after Phill turned me on to the phrase "it's a nightmare"
Phill also did a brilliant version of it and was working on a make over of it when CHordie went down last night.

With that being said - when I got up this morning I got playing around with  (mostly b/c I am not good enough of a musician and couldn't play the chords Phill was playing smile  ) it - and before I knew it - it morphed into a blues style song (which is  a lot easier for me). I am good with either version !

Anyway - this is my new version   which would not be possible without Phill !

Wretched Lives (It's A Nightmare) - Blues Version by Jim Kenyon and Phill Williams


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(intro: [Em] [Em] [B7] [Em] finger picked)




Verse 1


[Em]Not a demon to expose your flaws


[Em]Nor a savage beast with bloody claws


[Am]only your worst fears, falling into place


and you've [Em] lost it all, your life’s a waste


And the [B7] whole damn world doesn't seem to care


It's a [Em]nightmare[Em]


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Verse 2


[Em]gripped by the loneliness of a silent curse


[Em]constant reminders , that make things worse


[Am] you don't believe it, but yet you know


that there's [Em] no one to hold, there's nowhere to go


And the [B7] whole damn world doesn't seem to care


It's a [Em]nightmare , yeah [Em]It's a nightmare


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Chorus


[Am]such is the fate of those with wretched lives


[Em]hopelessly waiting for their ship to arrive


[Am]haunted by visions of what their lives lack



[B7]they can't move forward, yet they [Am]never want to go[Em] back




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(play intro again: [Em] [Em] [B7] [Em]finger picked)




Verse 3


[Em]Hurry to nowhere, like the aimless winds blows


In[Em] search of the comfort that someone else knows


[Am]every hour, every breath,your faith slip away


and you [Em]dread the darkness , that brings a new day


And the [B7] whole damn world doesn't seem to care


It's a [Em] nightmare , yeah [Em]It's a nightmare


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Chorus


[Am]such is the fate of those with wretched lives


[Em]hopelessly waiting for their ship to arrive


[Am]haunted by visions of what their lives lack


they [B7]can't move forward, yet they [Am]never want to go[Em] back




[Em][Am] B7] [Em]




And the [B7] whole damn world doesn't seem to care


It's a [Em] nightmare[Em]


And the [B7] whole damn world doesn't seem to care


[Em]It's a nightmare [Em]


Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: Wretched Lives Blues Version

Jim this song can be done real good in  many ways because your lyrics are so strong word arrows going straight into the bullseye.