Topic: Old set of lyrics

Hi I'm new to this forum.

I used to write both my words and music together, but I found some old lyrics I wrote once when I was away for the weekend without my guitar.
I wrote the lyrics to the metre of an obscure song by someone else I had on cassette ( told you it was old), and I could never write a satisfactory tune for it when I got home.
The only way I could ever write was either with my partner or myself doing words and music together.

It's kind of a country ballad

Here it is

I couldn’t quite believe it when I heard the news
That I would be a father before the year was thru
A fine example I’d be for a daughter or a son
You wouldn’t dare to tell them half the things I’ve done

I’ve lived out on the borders of respectability
Doing things you wouldn’t dream of were commonplace for me
(second half of verse missing)


Chorus
And there she is my darlin’, crying ‘cause she can’t fit in her clothes
Our love, at first a trickle, is now a riverflow
But who’s to say I can’t shed the old life that I had
And who’s to say that I can’t be a dad




I always liked a few of those lines

Re: Old set of lyrics

Hi chookrunner and welcome to the songwriting forum on chordie!

This is a great start - why don't you fill in the gaps and give these lines a few chords?  That's the great thing about writing stuff down - you can always get back to it some other day with fresh ears and ideas.

If you would like some help, there are many participants in this forum who could help with the renovation/restoration/completion of this song.

I really like the "who's to say" lines - seems to me that is the hub around which the rest of the song turns.  There is alot of potential in that phrase and many different answers could be suggested in the verses.  James

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