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Topic: Revised song - new lyric ~ chord changes ~ new Title

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Re: Revised song - new lyric ~ chord changes ~ new Title

I enjoyed playing your song. The lyrics create a slow, mournful tune, and there's that interesting use of the B7 to keep things interesting!

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Re: Revised song - new lyric ~ chord changes ~ new Title

I think you did good,will you make a video?

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Re: Revised song - new lyric ~ chord changes ~ new Title

Nice job, I like it. I think it comes from a place where most of us have been at least once. Would like to hear your version of it!

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Re: Revised song - new lyric ~ chord changes ~ new Title

Not sure how the original version read but I like this one. I'm not one for trying to imagine the tune to the song so I'll wait for your recording hopefully.

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Re: Revised song - new lyric ~ chord changes ~ new Title

Well I re-wrote it again, I think I improved it - Changed the title for the third time.  Used 1st capo - played it on my new Martin - sounded pretty good. even though it's sad, I tried to make it more " hopeful" smile   If anyone out there happens to try it and record it - send me a copy.

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke