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Topic: Love on the Line

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Re: Love on the Line

I made changes to the lyrics, and subsequently changed the title to "MORE".   I couldn't figure out how to change in on the listing.,S0 it says "Love on the Line" but the song is called MORE.  Sorry.

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Re: Love on the Line

looks good on paper,will you put out a video?

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Re: Love on the Line

I would if Phil would sing it       I am a really bad singer   sorry

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Re: Love on the Line

TIGLJK wrote:

I would if Phil would sing it       I am a really bad singer   sorry

I like a love song looks like in my mind a bit of country song I'm probably wrong has been known. lol

If you ask Phill nicely he just might.  smile
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Re: Love on the Line

some lyric change and title change

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Re: Love on the Line

The rhythm of the lyrics really supports the chord changes--it was very easy to sing. At first, I was wondering about the use of so many minor chords and how that moody sound wold fit a love song, but as I played it, I got the feeling that the guy in the song is a bit tortured by his desire--so I guess the minor chords fit. The mood of your song reminded me of Springsteen's "I'm on Fire," or Foreigner's "I want to know what love is."

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Re: Love on the Line

it's another cracker TIGLJK, i used a strumming/country type rhythm, some of the words were a little cramped with my rhythm, but it's a winner.

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