• From: Minnesota USA
  • Registered: 2008-10-19
  • Posts: 19

Topic: Fallen Again

To all of those in my life who care about me,
my eyes are filled with so much hurt, I can't see.
Just please have patience, for I've fallen again,
no matter how hard I try, I feel I just can't win.
I brush myself off, put my feet back on the ground,
because I know there's a reason, why I'm still around.
I try as hard as I can, to do my very best,
but it seems like all my efforts, never please the rest.
I feel like all the people, that I care about the most,
don't acknowledge me, it makes me feel like I'm a ghost.
I have to follow my heart, its quest is unbound,
I've fallen again, I'm down hear on the ground.
A person can only get back up so many times,
before they need some help, that's why I write these lines.
If someone sees on the ground a struggling man,
would you please stop real quick, to offer me your hand.
I've fallen again and I'm on the ground...

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Dustin Allen Severson
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  • From: Louisiana
  • Registered: 2008-11-06
  • Posts: 863

Re: Fallen Again

u-n-b
This is not a sermon, just what went through my mind as I finished Reading your poem.
"When we are down and feel no one sees us, we can always depend on Jesus."

Keep the poems coming and your chin up. AL(Deadstring)

When the Power of Love overcomes The Love of Power the world will be a better place.

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  • From: The Land Of Song
  • Registered: 2007-12-10
  • Posts: 5,704

Re: Fallen Again

hi upside, welcome to chordie.

just to say "your efforts have pleased me"  good first effort, look forward to seeing more from you

phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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  • From: Minnesota USA
  • Registered: 2008-10-19
  • Posts: 19

Re: Fallen Again

thanx smile

Dustin Allen Severson
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  • mirron
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Re: Fallen Again

VERY GOOD WORDS FROM THE HEART!! thats how i write and i can tell u do the same!! keep on writing my friend!!!

  • From: Minnesota USA
  • Registered: 2008-10-19
  • Posts: 19

Re: Fallen Again

mirron wrote:

VERY GOOD WORDS FROM THE HEART!! thats how i write and i can tell u do the same!! keep on writing my friend!!!

Thanks mirron

Dustin Allen Severson
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