• Registered: 2010-07-01
  • Posts: 10

Topic: My first song

Hi all,
My first (very cheesy, written for my fiance) song is on youtube here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=puYlAd8M59I

I'd be very appreciative of any comments, to see what people think.

Thank you smile

  • From: A black hole in deep space
  • Registered: 2007-10-28
  • Posts: 7,865

Re: My first song

Chris you have already posted this in the songwriting forum it is not necessary to post it again in another forum this is Chordie policy, please decide which forum you wish to keep it in and remove the other.

"Growing old is not for sissies"

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  • From: Alabama Gulf Coast
  • Registered: 2008-06-24
  • Posts: 1,819

Re: My first song

Not cheesy at all, Chris.
The lady is your fiance. She loves you already. This should bowl her over.
Nice solid rhythm. Thoughtful presentation.
Keep up the good work.
toots

We pronounce it "Guf Coast".
Ya'll wanna go down to the Guf?

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