Topic: just be

hello all. this is my first song... I hope some of you will like it. as for how to play it, well sorry, can't explain, I am not a great musician. I also don'tlike the title a lot and look foreward to your suggestions. thanks and regards.


Just be…

[C] Just one morning being [F] strong enough
[C]To beat the shit out of all [F] bad
[B]Create that magic [F]diet pill
[D]That will burn that to much [G] fat

[C] Just one afternoon being [F] smart enough
[C]To solve some science [F] problems
[B]Prevent the world from [F] global heath
[D]And also save those [G]dolphins


[F]But here I am, just an [D] average man
[F]And average can’t move [D] mountains
[F]Here I am just an [D] average man
A desert without [G] fountain



[C]Just one evening being [F] brave enough
[C]To tell you what I’m [F]thinking
[B]And throw away those [F]cigarettes
[D]And stop that heavy [G]drinking

[C] For just one night be [F] happy
[C]With what and who you [F] are
[B]Be thankful, sing and [F] whistle
[D]Don’t wait for a shooting [G] star


[F]So there you are just an [D] average guy
[F]Now what is wrong with [D] that?
[F]Just do your thing and [D] don’t give up
Go for the green not for the [G] red


[C]Cause one day you will [F] day my friend
[C]One day you will not [F] be
[B]Don’t waste your time, cause you’ll [F]regret[G]
To much to do and[C] see

Re: just be

hi jim well for your first song it sure makes a big statement,there's a sticky post at the top of songwriting to explain how to present and fomat each song,nothing wrong you've just missed the format code at the start and end,well done....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

Re: just be

Nice one sir,

Id call this  piece "Shooting Star, Sure aint we all  stars trying to shine as best we can in life.

Your creative star shines this day.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: just be

Welcome to the forum wannabejimmorrison
Lots a great friendly folk here that will gladly help you out so don't be afraid to ask any questions or to contribute any way you can.

Nice piece of writing for a first go around, I look forwards to more from you. big_smile
As a suggestion for a title: "Just an Average Man"
Just a suggestion. big_smile

[F]But here I am, just an [D] average man
[F]And average can’t move [D] mountains
[F]Here I am just an [D] average man
A desert without [G] fountain

Well Done.

Kenny

F.Y.I. This forum is family based so vulgar language is not tolerated. big_smile

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