Topic: Your Eyes

I wish I couldn't swim, and drown in your eyes.
They are ocean blue, like little lakes on your face
so great and beautiful like a baby-deer in a moonrise
Seeing what you see, reading what you read without disgrace

I love your voice, the vocal chords moving, open and close
Your lips so red, without gloss, tasting like divine nectar
The way you walk, the way you move, and never a pose
You are so natural, tasting sweet, so smart, and your humor

I feel so good, smaller than a little bug in your body
Whatever you see, I see it too, whatever you think I know
I feel your feelings, your pain, your joy even knowing nobody
When I whisper in your brain, you what, why and how

Some day, I will be bigger and must leave you, which I regret
But a woman like you, your love, concern, I'll never forget
Would you keep me with you, being one coming from two
You don't have another, you can feel me, whatever I do

I want you so bad, it's worth a fight, not for one night
Skin to skin, body to body, extincting the light
You are my best friend, I lived in you, and now with you
We'll be together always, all days, even if I need some glue

[color=blue]- GITAARDOCPHIL SAIS: TO CONQUER DEAD, YOU HAVE TO DIE[/color]   AND [color=blue] we are born to die[/color]
- MY GUITAR PLAYS EVERY STYLE = BLUES, ROCK, METAL, so I NEED TO LEARN HOW TO PLAY IT.
[color=blue]Civilization began the first time an angry person cast a word instead of a rock.[/color]

Re: Your Eyes

Very good Lieven !

I find more meaning behind this one, and it's quite physical, as befits a Doctor

"Don't play what's there, play what's not there." Miles Davis

Re: Your Eyes

hi lieven,

this has to be one of your best (in english that is) the imagery is beautiful, i think it's about a baby?

well done, your getting so much better

phill

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: Your Eyes

It's more about my "disability" and reaction between me as person, dreaming of you.

[color=blue]- GITAARDOCPHIL SAIS: TO CONQUER DEAD, YOU HAVE TO DIE[/color]   AND [color=blue] we are born to die[/color]
- MY GUITAR PLAYS EVERY STYLE = BLUES, ROCK, METAL, so I NEED TO LEARN HOW TO PLAY IT.
[color=blue]Civilization began the first time an angry person cast a word instead of a rock.[/color]

Re: Your Eyes

Well what ever your thoughts  were behind this one Docs,

Its a lovely intimate piece.

Very well done, your English has vastly improved over  the years.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: Your Eyes

hhmmmm... very DEEP especially if it is more of your disability how it comes to life in a very intimate way.  Nice

Art and beauty are in the eyes of the beholder.
What constitutes excellent music is in the ears of the listener.

Re: Your Eyes

lovey, beautiful, touching piece.  loved it