• From: BELGIUM
  • Registered: 2007-01-27
  • Posts: 3,403

Topic: they never critic my song

I WANT CRITICS: BAD, GOOD about lyrics (I am a non English or American speaking citizen) so I mess with some words until the pieces fall together.
I used to write poems, lyrics, 1000...., all in Dutch, now all in English, I can't help it, so help is appreciated.

[color=blue]- GITAARDOCPHIL SAIS: TO CONQUER DEAD, YOU HAVE TO DIE[/color]   AND [color=blue] we are born to die[/color]
- MY GUITAR PLAYS EVERY STYLE = BLUES, ROCK, METAL, so I NEED TO LEARN HOW TO PLAY IT.
[color=blue]Civilization began the first time an angry person cast a word instead of a rock.[/color]

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  • From: derbyshire
  • Registered: 2007-05-17
  • Posts: 2,844

Re: they never critic my song

hi phil i will always give an honest opinion of your work,you can't hope to progress with songwriting if your getting the wrong message about your songs,i think you have some brilliant ideas but are struggling to get your thoughts down with the language barrier ,but your doing a great job at transcribing,i could'nt do it so your one up on me.....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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  • From: BELGIUM
  • Registered: 2007-01-27
  • Posts: 3,403

Re: they never critic my song

thanks daddycool, I'll try.

[color=blue]- GITAARDOCPHIL SAIS: TO CONQUER DEAD, YOU HAVE TO DIE[/color]   AND [color=blue] we are born to die[/color]
- MY GUITAR PLAYS EVERY STYLE = BLUES, ROCK, METAL, so I NEED TO LEARN HOW TO PLAY IT.
[color=blue]Civilization began the first time an angry person cast a word instead of a rock.[/color]

gitaardocphil's Website