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still no sure about the chorus,any ideas
4/4 time arpeggio style
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copyright Trevor Scrivens 1998
hi trevor just a suggestion,if you put the chorus between the 1st and second and repeat the chorus at the end,good song again....stay cool
Thanks daddy,I thought I'd never get a post,just tried it sounds great,thanks your a cool guy,much appreciated.
I don't know why I didn't think of it,I do get stuck in my ways. LOL 
Trevor
hi trevor,
just seen your song, do you know what sort of thing your looking for, or has daddycool sorted it out for you?
i like the flow of the chords, but i'm afraid i played it in a waltz time 3/4 beat, or as russ keeps telling me 6/8 ?
you can email me direct if you have anything you'd like to discuss, i'll be on-line till about 9.00pm tonight [wednesday]
phill.
Hi Trevor,
Promising lyrics and progression.
Let me know if you need a hand on this by Email.
Well Done
Kenny
Don't have cords, but maybe a chorus along the lines of:
But you needed me to say what i couldn't say
And I wanted to but now it's much too late
If I had to do it all again and you would have me back ....
what would I say
Thanks Ken & AccoustikNoyz,But got Phill working on it at the moment and doing a good job I might add.
Thanks again for your input
Trevor
dude nice song i just played it on my acoustic guitar and it sounds awsome im still trying to write my first song have any tips?
hello people,
this song has now been finished and i've posted it on soundclick, follow the link below, click my name below the photo and you'll find the song there with one or two others.
have fun.
note to S.N.S, dont try too hard, let it come naturally. if you have a few words popping into your head, just write them down. if a tune comes with them try to play it on whatever instrument you play, then post it....you'll get plenty of help here if you ask for it.
phill
Top Drawer recording as usual my Welsh friend.
Having good lyrics makes it that much more enjoyable listening to the finished production.
Well Done on a Very Good Collaboration Trevor and Phill.
KAP
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