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Topic: Take me away ,a song i wrote when inside

Take me awayTrevor Scrivens



8 bar Intro


[Bm7] [G] [A] [Em7]


[Bm7] [G] [A] [Asus]


   


Verse 1




I[D] wake up in the morning,Throw cold[F#m] water on my face,


[Em]stare out thro the bars,of this [A]cold & lonely place,


[D]Wishing away tomorrow,with a[F#m] head of useless dreams,


[Em]I cant face another day,the disa[A] pointment that it brings,


CHORUS


Take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way,


[Em7]take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way,[Asus] [A]


     


Verse 2




[D]I Walk along the fours,my heart[F#m] so full of shame,


[Em]Pushing past my anger,I try[A] hard to feel again,


[D]All the beautiful things,that this[F#m] life has to give,


[Em]I can see it in your eye's,in the[A] memory of our last kiss


CHORUS


Take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way,



[Em7] take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way


   


Bridge




[Em7] I know i let you down,My[F#m] mind it wasnt strong,


[Em7]When I felt I lost your love,I[F#m] couldnt carry on,


[Em7]every day that past,i fell[F#m] deeper in my pain,


[G]my life was spiralling down & down,i [A]wanted you back a[A7]gain,




[Bm7] [G] [A] [Asus] [A]


   


 


Verse 3




[D]Crossing off another day,in here[F#m] time passses slow,


[Em]I think all our yesterdays,the times[A] we used to know,


[D]sitting down i write to you,with a[F#m] smile on my face,


[Em]for all this love i feel for you,no[A] time will ever erase,


CHORUS


Take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way,


[Em7]take me [Bm7]away,


[G]take-me-A[A]way,[Asus] [D]





Copyright Trevor Scrivens 27/04/2009 updated 30th November 2017

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Re: Take me away ,a song i wrote when inside

hi trevor another great song,ps enclose your chords in [] and [ song]at the top of the message page before you put the{ title and your name in} then at the end of your song put[ /song] to format it. it took me a while to latch onto it...stay cool

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Re: Take me away ,a song i wrote when inside

I like it...

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Re: Take me away ,a song i wrote when inside

I like it alot. Love to hear it if you got a recording. Ive got one called Caged I think you'd like. Check out my myspace page. If you want. Not trying to high jack your thread. I can just relate

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Re: Take me away ,a song i wrote when inside

Hi Selso Had a listen I like Caged a lot,I think you have a lot worst in prisons out there not so bad in the Great Britain. Funny I'm writing a song called I cant feel the sunshine any more not finished yet. I really like That's the price you pay,love the harmonica.

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Re: Take me away ,a song i wrote when inside

Hi Riddler,Glad you like it smile  I like your sound,really polished. Home sweet home cant beat it.

I only listen to a couple,but ill be back.

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Re: Take me away ,a song i wrote when inside

Added link to rough track "Take me away" let me know what you think.

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Re: Take me away ,a song i wrote when inside

Ctech I can feel pain coming through in your song, man you put it together good.

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Re: Take me away ,a song i wrote when inside

Cheers Peatle Jville, me and the girl have been back together now for the last 10 years. As for jail I never want to go back.

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