Topic: Take Me Back

A            D   
Another rain drop
A                                             E                             
And I'm still singin through the tears
A                            D
tryin' to keep my composure
A                 E                  repeat pattern for verses
for all these years
So many things to see
and none of them make sense
So I just laugh along
with practiced pretense

Chorus-
A
Take Me Back to those
D
Sunny days
A
Strawberries and fool's gold
E
Life's simple ways
A
Take Me Back to those
D
picnics in the grass
A
Smiles and philosophies
E
that always seemed to last

Another wrong turn
and these voices in my head
keep giving me new ideas
that always end up dead
Broken guitar strings
but I still know my songs
Someone please just tell me
where we went wrong

CHORUS

Bup ba da da
Take me back
Bup ba dada
Take me home x2

I wrote this a couple weeks ago, and I'm fourteen, so this is a little departure in tone from normal, but that part of the reason I like it.

CHeers!

Re: Take Me Back

This is PDG, Mr Linusguitar. The lines are tight and the feel runs through the whole of the song. Now if only I had a guitar with me . . . .

"Don't play what's there, play what's not there." Miles Davis

Re: Take Me Back

Broken guitar strings
but I still know my songs

Love this line!

All You Need is Love smile

Re: Take Me Back

"So I just laugh along,with practiced pretense"

Nice write Linusguitar smile For 14 years old you write with a lot of insight.

Kudos

Kenny

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