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Topic: Taunted Dreams. Helena Donovan.

Something i read here on the forum tonight reminded me of this piece i wrote
quite some time ago now.

I hope you dont mind my breezin back in here tonight ? I finally found  a spare hour to browse before beddybyes lol

Taunted Dreams.

Real emotions feel the pain
like  your  uncovered  in the rain
Every drop just makes them sting
Pierces heart , love ,everything.

Pandora fills your heart and  soul
Tries to take from you your goals,
Believing this, your everything
No thoughts left for people things.

Your pain  howlling deep inside
Scattered thoughts  has no  pride
Or, peace  for you in nightly sleep
Still   taunted   with your dreams.

Your failing now an open  plight
Touch Unhinged , rejected choice
Mindless  chatter,  it  has no voice
just   loneliness in  sight.

Now, Where are you of promised things?
Banded with some fine gold rings
Social kid , oh  so  smart !
  Broke the laws of God and hearts.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !
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Re: Taunted Dreams. Helena Donovan.

you can sleep with thoughts like these? lol

if it was so old it was written in latin, it would still be welcome, especially form you helena.

my wife was once given a dream catcher to stave away the night terrors, but all it seems to catch is dust!

i like this and the reference to "pandora" slipped in under the mat. you have always been profound then, it's not just a recent thing? my writings are so shallow, i can't hide anything behind a veil of flowery words [that was an attempt...failed i think?]

nice work, young lady, makes me yearn for more


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Re: Taunted Dreams. Helena Donovan.

Hi Lena,

Sorry - I'm on a roll at the minute

If I, once stung, had dropped that ball,
Watched it roll, saw it fall
Beyond the limits of my outstretched hand.

I might have bled at night, like you,
But I've the sting and her ball too
Though precious poison beats this wedding band.

"What's so funny 'bout peace, love and understandin' ."    Elvis Costello

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Re: Taunted Dreams. Helena Donovan.

Thank you Both"

very much for taking the time   to comment..  Its always appreciated..

Phill ! There is absolutely nothing shallow about your writing.
Dust off that dream catcher ! Dust is known as stagnant energy in the Feng Shui World.

Alansheeran !. Cryptic i would say !  But ya know what ? I get the message lol

Sun and seashells to you both.


Old Doll.

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Re: Taunted Dreams. Helena Donovan.

Hi Lena smile
A beautifully written piece that hits close to home for me.
Taunted Dreams helps me to think,reflect,and hold no regret.
Tomorrow is a different day. smile

Thanks for this.

Kenny

looking forwards to your next piece.

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