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(23 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle Jville wrote:

Phill this subject is close to my heart as Maree and I when we were working with the Salvation Army we became very  aware of a big problem here in NZ of domestic violence
Not only the violence but also the constant  verbal abuse they had to endure. It can be  hard to convince  beaten women that they had to escape relationships  not only for themselves but also their children. With  a big input from  Jandle we  put together these lyrics below   about that subject, which we both later on  turned into songs.                       
https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan/move-onmp3
Move On
Whatever happened to
that beautiful lady
I use to know
what's happened to you
for your self esteem
I think that it's time
for you to move on
he is all wrong
He's been abusing you
It's time to move on
he's all wrong for you
it's time to move on
You got to regain
yourself and forget
for it's to his shame
don't you take the blame
you're far to good
to put up with that
he's a snake in the grass
get out real fast
it's time to move on he is all wrong
it's time to move on
he is so wrong
He's been abusing you
it's time to move on
he's all wrong for you
it's time to move on
And when you move on
you'll become real strong
and reclaim your life
you'll become what you like
he has no rights
you have your own life
It's time to move on
he is all wrong
it's time to move on
he is so wrong

Nice song! i hope also that it will make hope in women who have been through any type of abuse.

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(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

great lyrics! did you thought when you will make a song of it?

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(4 replies, posted in Song requests)

Classical Guitar wrote:

Welcome to Chordie. I could not find either song listed on Chordie. For  chords to Grayson Hugh's 'Talk it over try this link: http://www.yourchords.com/277026/Grayso … ranspose1/

For 'Would I Lie to you' by Charles and Eddie you can try this link: https://www.e-chords.com/chords/charles … lie-to-you   

Hope these help. If you also play by tabs there are some other links.


If he cant find that song those on normal search then how did you find these. Did you use any tricks while finding?

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

you are so good at poems and songwriting. you are an actually talented songwriter. and your love for your country is just awesome.

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Nice work! and your lyrics are so true. I want to listen to the song of this. share with us.

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

so lovely song! Seems voice and song synchronize perfectly. Great work!

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(24 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

Your December letter seems really nice. and Season Greetings to you also.

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(7 replies, posted in Poems)

Great poems. flowing style was really good. looks like you are on fire. made a blast. best of luck with your next poems.

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Wow...so lovely lyrics. i would really like if  I can hear the song.

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(5 replies, posted in Song requests)

thebigh wrote:

just a thought, could this be don't dream its over by Crowded House

Well done!! your thought works well big_smile

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

mojo01 wrote:

here is a short one I wrote the last couple of nights, not real pleased with the end of it so a few more drinks tomorrow night and it may get changed. Let me know what you think


your song and lyrics are so beautiful. nice work!

neophytte wrote:

Leaving on a Jet Plane

Enjoy!!

nice..i really like it ! smile