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Thank you so much.

I'm still very much finding my way - Choruses often pop into my head but then I can't think of anything to hang a verse on. Practice I guess. . .

Hi Bill
I've been off chordie and soundcloud for quite a while - sometimes my energy just goes and I find it hard to get going. I've just seen this post and I do hope that things are improving for you and Dondra. One day at a time and cherish each moment.

A lovely song

Everything is cool - Still friends

Not at all - I was overcome at your kind words.

Great fun

Thanks TIGLJK. I appreciate the positive feedback.

Thanks too to Phill. I hadn't put up links to any of my songs because when I signed up it came up with a no-link or get banned sort of message.
Here are the links to my song and Grah1's cover. Hopefully this is okay now.
https://soundcloud.com/mazzy-catseyes/brokenmp3
https://soundcloud.com/mazzy-catseyes/b … r-by-grah1

Thanks for the comments on the songs Strummerboy Bill. I'm enjoying this process very much and the support of this group.

Grah1 has done an arrangement of my song 'Broken'. Quite a different arrangement - different key, fewer chords, different phrasing, choruses run together as a bridge and a great guitar solo at the end.

We can learn so much from each other here. Thanks for taking the time Grah1 - it's cool.

You can hear his version on my soundcloud - mazzy catseyes.

Here are the chords for his arrangement.

Broken - Words© Marian Kerr, 2015 - this arrangement Grah 1

E                                                                   A
Lyin' all alone on the cold side of the  bed
D                                                                              A
Tryin' to forget those cruel words that were said
A                                                                           E
There's pain in my  heart and tears on my face
E                                                             A
Hurtin' so deep that  time won't erase
D
I never thought that life would  turn out this  way
A                                                                    E
Now it seems there's  no words left to say

A
There's ice in the  place where my  heart used to  be
G
I  never thought you could  stop lovin' me
D                                                              A
I look in the mirror ,and I see only  pain
A
And  wonder if I will ever feel whole
G
Shattered dreams  lie in bits on the  floor
D                                                                     A
I just don't  want this,  heartache any-more

A
I'm lonely
G                       D
Broken and  empty 

A
I'm lonely
G                       D
Broken and  empty 

solo  over  AGD then end

Cool - can't wait to hear your version

I'd be interested in seeing your interpretation of the song - I'll email you so you can send them to me. Thank you.

Thanks Strummerboy Bill - I had a lot of fun writing all those amazing ladies into my song.
Did you get to listen to it ? My friends gave me a real push to have a go.
Nothing like getting out of your comfort zone to keep you feeling alive.

Thanks Jan - I've tried several ways to record without the echo - have you tried the online software yet? I couldn't get it to work. It would open up a lot of possibilities.