Thank you, Jan I wrote the poem, as my way of saying no matter what is happening music can have a way cutting through that. If its true the musicians kept playing when the Titanic sank I can see why and no doubt there were prayers been fervently prayed at the same time. In times of sadness people sing to lift their spirits. When people are oppressed its hard for the oppressors to take their music away in many cases. Though there are many frustrating moments when trying to play music there is also those eureka moments. Hearing a musician on you tube talking about his eureka moments is what got me started on writing the poem. Sometimes someone playing melodic music is all I need to lift my spirits when feeling a bit down and I suspect that is true for most people in those tough moments.
2 2024-11-18 22:50:38
Re: Guitar Here You Are (7 replies, posted in Poems)
Cheers Piri the old Praetorian Guard were like the Russian KGB today they had the ability to make people disappear or die. Julia Agrippina got to pull the strings behind the scenes after poisoning her husband so she could marry her uncle Claudius after bringing about the murder of his wife.. It was then thought she poisoned Claudius. Her connection to the head of the Praetorian Guard meant that they then proclaimed Nero at the age of seventeen as the Emperor of the Roman Empire.
Romans were good at knocking people of. For a so called civilized sophisticated society they had a deep attraction to extreme violence and death. Cavemen were most probably Saints compared with them.
I guess we can thank the Greeks for starting this thing known as democracy round about 600AD.
Peace and goodwill to everyone nothing much has changed since John and Yoko sang Give Peace A Chance.
3 2024-11-18 01:20:42
Re: Guitar Here You Are (7 replies, posted in Poems)
Piri, while our guitars sleep the affected people gently weep. Or maybe it should be while my guitar gently weeps the politicians are asleep at the wheel. Though throwing people to the lions today would be considered a crime. Thats what they did in Roman times. Back in the day of the Roman Empire, Emperors thought they were gods. I often wonder in this day have our politicians moved on. One man's justice is another's injustice one man's song is another's noise. Many workers work hard singing their songs while the hoy polloi put their air muffs on. We are all 90 percent water but what people often see is just what sits above. Diversity is a good state divisive leaders just create hate. The balance between need and greed is always going to be a tricky one. The frustration for all people on earth is how our leaders are using their stewardship of public assets. What is the real agenda of those seeking power when they open their mouths is it the truth or smoke and mirrors. I don't think there is any country where the people would sing yes the President loves me because what he or she does tells me so.
4 2024-11-17 08:35:57
Topic: Guitar Here You Are (7 replies, posted in Poems)
Guitar Here You Are
A,.. D and C and other chords that can be
Politicians looking for popularity
People looking for sanity
Hoping for clarity
Listening to those looking for votes
While some want to learn notes
People like us start playing guitar
Small chords not returning rewards
Rivers to ford
Mountains to cross
Before hearing our reward
Sweet sounding chords
Notes that rang
Music from before time began
In our hunger pangs
Angels sang
Old church bells rang
Through out the land
All doesn't have to be so bland
A better foundation then sinking sand
Rock and roll
Simple country and soul
Taking our blues away
Singing our songs
Having our say
Defeating evil
Is why people pray
Singing songs
While trying to make hay
5 2024-11-16 23:46:37
Re: Spam (6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
RIP Dondra. Here is a poem written by Strummer Bills beautiful Dondra back in 2015 about the power of love when you find your soul buddy.
The sunshine that you gave to me
Warmed my heart and soul
It chased away the shadows and then my life felt whole
Sunshine painted all the corners of my life
Surrounding me with comfort and taking away the strife
Sunshine, invisible, surrounding me, so warm
Swaddles me, comforts me and so I fear no harm
Reminding me of you and your selfless devotion
I'm fortunate to know a love that so transcends emotion
Your gift flowed gently in the room, grew into my heart
And took away the gloom.
I never knew you had the Sunshine
That it was saved for me
God leant to you the sunshine
And was pleased that you chose me.
Special gifts like Sunshine are so, so very rare
God trusted you with Sunshine
Because He knows how much you care"
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Dondra Craig 9/16/2015
Dondra Craig
6 2024-11-12 07:59:35
Re: Thoughts of You (3 replies, posted in Poems)
Shivan, I like the way you write that from a feeling of vulnerability. Many good songs and poems have to come from a sense where do we belong in situations almost like an overthinking that most humans go through. So your words resonate and would connect with many in not a cliche way.. Sometimes I think when writing poems or songs about what we are feeling or our private thoughts it's end goal should be to give the reader or the listener a license that it is alright to acknowledge they have had those feelings and thoughts also.
7 2024-11-10 07:35:50
Re: Under 30 over 30 (8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Hello Jan, your a good talent and a real good sort it is always good to have you do what you do. Thank you for being you. The things we do and pursue shouldn't be governed by age but hopefully the good things it can do. Age doesn't define you you're a natural talent.
8 2024-11-09 00:09:56
Re: Under 30 over 30 (8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Cheers Piri, you have a good talent and an excellent way of making music.
As for me living upside down the blood rushes to the brain.
While pushing my thoughts around in strange ways.
While my feet have a good grip on the earth.
My thoughts fly of into space
With age
Our memories dance like leaves in the breeze,
Wisdom's our armour, we wear it with ease.
In every challenge, we see a chance,
To paint our story, to join the dance
Time's a river, that flows so slow,
But in our heart, there's a steady glow.
Lines on older faces tell tales untold,
Age is just a canvas, let colours blend
,
Creativity blooms, it will never end.
Dexterity may wane, but our spirits will soar,
With every passing year, we find even more.
In every wrinkle a spark of gold.
9 2024-11-07 01:08:15
Re: Under 30 over 30 (8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Richard, I limit my internet time nowadays as I find it takes me down different rabbit holes and distracts me from doing other things that make me feel good and challenge me in a good way. As my musical dexterity wanes in the last few years I find my creativity instead of sparking a explosion of new ideas in my mind has become like a flower that no longer blooms making it harder to paint my story in a way that makes my mind dance. Sometimes when I have an idea it does freshen up my mind but when I throw it out there instead of it picking up steam it starts to sink due to me not being able to give it good legs. Having said that there is more to me than trying to write a song so life is good. Age is just a canvas that let my colours blend in a way its freeing not being onto everything. Harry Bernstein started writing his first novel when he was 93. He gained literary fame when it was published when he was96.. He went on to write three more books.
10 2024-11-07 00:56:30
Re: NOVEMBER 2024 – RANDOM WORDS (11 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Two good performances there EB and Richard.
11 2024-11-05 10:18:26
Re: Under 30 over 30 (8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
EB If you stay engaged, you will stay creative. Age has little to do with it. As they say many a good tune is played on an old fiddle.
12 2024-11-04 11:01:49
Topic: Under 30 over 30 (8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I like to think age shouldn't mean you can't write good songs its only your health that makes a difference. I am sure many on here have some great songs to come out of them later in life. I was interested on Rick Beato take on when the Beatles and other musicians were at their writing or musical best.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xxR6Zi1euvc&t=207s
13 2024-10-24 20:28:37
Re: Ai Videos/ Beatles (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I wonder how much of that is AI and how much does the human put into it.. I will attach me having a short conversation with an animator about that side of things.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ilmgLZBPfSw
14 2024-10-21 09:07:44
Re: FSOTM - Entries for October 2024 (11 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Keep up the good work Jan you're a legend. Here is my attempt at a poem using a couple of words on this month's list
Custody And Anger
A male Tui bird sings for his wife
He loves her for life
Looking for nectar
He always respects her
Human husband and wife
Using cockney slang a trouble and strife
After bonding
You can have a good life
Or end up in strife
Not living your best life
Custody and power
When things go sourer
Over a sad child who has to cower instead of flower
For some happily forever after is a fable
While for others love is shown everyday
Around the kitchen table
An angry response
Instead of calm talk
Ruining a good time with a knife and fork
Be like a Tui
At the beginning of every day
Sing a happy song
Wish each other a good day
Let true love find a way
Have a good day
Don't let anger wreck your day.
Arrogance and vain conceit
Can put bad behavior on repeat
15 2024-10-19 03:18:30
Re: Ai Videos/ Beatles (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Affirmative, Richard be good if EB put up the link for this. The roll of humans seems to be getting taken over I'm not sure if all the hard work of credible creatives is going to be ruined by someone pressing just a few buttons and entering a few commands. Did any sci-fi writers in the past predict what is happening with AI now??? Is art any good without human emotion??
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B1BdQcJ2ZYY
16 2024-10-15 10:45:42
Re: Fake performances (10 replies, posted in My local band and me)
I have heard of it being alleged that certain bands back in the 70's and 80's used backstage musicians to fatten their sound.
17 2024-10-15 10:34:41
Re: War Torn Calm (18 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Cheers Richard when I clicked on your link it didn't take me to the documentary just a synopsis about King Homeboy without me being able to access it. So it could be the same one as the one on YouTube that I put my link to .
18 2024-10-14 22:49:06
Re: War Torn Calm (18 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Cheers Richard , King Homeboy is a big guy with a big heart he also is a actor a short story writer a M C among many other things that should be an interesting Doco when it comes out. I will attach a short doco about his backstory and some of his early life struggles made back in 2015 here just in case anyone is interested.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uHsUdc3ISKg
19 2024-10-14 22:40:00
Re: Fake performances (10 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Good Subject to talk about Grah. I must have seen thousands of buskers in my lifetime. In my experience the really talented ones will get an audience around them. Out on the street there are always going to be fakes and hustlers as well as real talent. To me its about the integrity of the performance. When a performer uses tech that's fine providing they are showing talent and are entertaining. A few years back there was a lot of Micheal Jackson impersonators busking some real good most not that good. I'm not a Micheal Jackson fan but there was one guy he was brilliant had all the moves and really put on a good show and I liked that. He was lip-syncing to Micheal Jackson tracks but his dance moves and performance was top class. He had the perfect dance moves right look and cloths plus he did some other cleaver things with a very comedic talk between songs. I think now to make any money busking you have to be real good and even then the real good ones because of the economics around the world are struggling.Part of the art of busking is securing a good spot where the passerby has money to spend away from the beggars and drug addicts that seem to be appearing everywhere on streets around the world.
20 2024-10-10 02:14:58
Re: War Torn Calm (18 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Peatle Jville wrote:Here is my rough attempt at a poem song just with my guitar that I wrote.. Hope it makes sense.
I liked your poem song Peatle, I think many people are wondering about this world of ours right now.
Cheers Jan there is a lot of turmoil in the world. I just am thankful and feel blessed to be where I am at the moment. Having said that without feeling apprehensive I realise that we have to enjoy and treasure the moment when things are good because all roads have bumps in them. As many of the buskers around town tell me it is tough out there at the moment but despite that you have to remain positive. I will attach a busker talking to me about that here.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjxB-LGwRMk
21 2024-10-07 20:50:16
Re: War Torn Calm (18 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Deep and dark Pedr. Sorry I'm late reacting to this but I have been busy doing other stuff. At this moment that pic of steak and chips has got my juices flowing, though I'd rather have the steak cooked a little longer. Back to your song/poem; the world seems to have gone crazy once again. Why cant people see that trade and getting along is preferable to killing each other to gain a little ground. Or settling a two thousand year grudge with missiles and bullets! As Mr Lennon said, "GIVE PEACE A CHANCE" Wise words
Cheers Piri
I am a bit of a medium to well done steak man. Good old John Lennon had it right when it came to Peace. Over the years due to my involvement with a lot of war vets I have also seen the way good people have been left with horrible impacts after been involved with war conflicts. I will attach a short video of me talking to a war vet friend of mine Ray about it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wGMUcZTeOBk
22 2024-10-07 20:42:50
Re: War Torn Calm (18 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Bob Dylan and Lou Reed
Thank you Grah now I know I have often thought that Dylan Reed would be a good name for a Band or a stage name for somebody.
23 2024-10-07 06:12:40
Re: War Torn Calm (18 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Thank you, Grah I don't know who Bob and Lou are but I like the comment. My monologue, with the guitar was a bit of an experiment in bringing ideas out using different threads that hopefully connect what I was thinking when hearing the world news on the radio the morning I wrote the lyrics. Originally started it as a straight-out poem that slowly built up into a feeling of apprehension but also in the hope like nature that things continually change and have seasons. The ups and downs and all the bumps in the road of life summed up in a couple of minutes with my guitar backing up the words.
24 2024-10-07 05:48:46
Re: Kendal Live Music Festival 2024 (5 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Good one Grah and nice to see the lady having a boogie and getting into your music. Fill in guitarist does a good job also.
25 2024-10-05 09:07:59
Re: War Torn Calm (18 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Peatle Jville wrote:Thank you Richard for taking the time to listen and comment. With hindsight I think that maybe I could have taken a more lighthearted comedic approach to my poem song monologue about being grateful to live in New Zealand. Maybe the Fred Dagg approach I should have taken here is his example attached below.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AYvMeT2GC14Hi,
Yep, I got that undertone of being lucky to be away from it, and it kind of reminded me of a post I saw on Facebook that went something like:
You don't like it over there,
So you come to live over here,
But don't bring your problems from over there,
To us living over here,
Because we never lived over there
...That wasn't all of it, but catches the gist of it. Too many problems in the world today!! Most of them could be solved over a steak and beer!!
Cheers
Richard
Richard, beer and steak diplomacy I like that.