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Being thicker than most folks I had to read through this poem a few times to fully understand the sheer brilliance of this work. To be compared to work by Shakespeare is no bad thing. Unfortunately the only thing I know about Bill Shakespeare is the pub called Shakespeare's Arms in Nottingham England. To me what we have here is something more in line with that classic rock anthem ( Don't Fear) The Reaper.
I look forward to hearing the words put to music.     

I really enjoyed listening to this, nice melody great lyrics what is their not to like about this song. I can hear the James Taylor influence but also a bit of John Denver me thinks and that's no bad thing.     

Only someone from The Land of Song could have put those words together. It just sounds so Welsh. Great stuff Phill.     

A great little song and fun to play. I couldn't help thinking of John Entwistle and his Boris.
Good luck with the twerking, but remember. The A & E gets pretty crowded at this time of year.     

I dont think I've ever read such a thought provoking soul searching post as this on Chordie. I had to read the post a couple of times to fully grasp the meaning,  followed the link and read the comments. All of which  I found totally absorbing and to be honest theirs parts in there where I don't come out to well.     

Brilliant lyrics. I nearly choked on, my pants don't reach down to my feet and my armpits don't smell all that sweet. I just love it.     

Sounds like you were enjoying playing that as much as I'm sure the audience were enjoying listening to it. Very much up to your usual excellent standard Graham.     

Just my interpretation and purely my own humble opinion, and probably just a sign of the times, but I think the melody has a lovely dreamlike quality. I imagine someone sitting reflecting on some low point in their life or maybe just life in general and hoping theirs a light at the end of the tunnel and better times ahead. I look forward to you adding lyrics and if they're as good as the melody it's going to be a great song.     

I was thinking you could perhaps get a meerkat to join the band.     

I really like the tongue in cheek way you written and sing this song, but I particularly enjoyed verse 3. So witty.     

A very tongue in cheek sort of a song. Had a quick run through and sort of changed the last line very slightly. Hope you don't mind.

And with the devil we all burn up the track
Wether I go to heaven
Or if I end up in h#ll
You know that I have lived my life
And won't be coming back

I do apologise but it sort of works for me.