Here's a song I wrote...Well,it's just lyrics now.My friend and I are still trying to compose the music....
The love and the acceptance
Blinded by hate and anger
Such an insignificance
Making our bond a disaster
Niku shimi no naifu o suteru
Watashi no kokoro o sashita
Niku shimi no ju- to dangan o haku
Watashi no kokoro o utta
Kodomo no omoi de ni kizu o iyasu
Arasai sezu ni sho-rai no tame ni
Watashi tachi no kizuna to shu-fuku
Watashi ga okonatte iru ayamachi o yurushi
Wasurete
Watashi o ukeire
Anata no jinsei no ichi bu to shite
Shite kudasai
Stop treating me like an animal
I am a human,just like you!
I have a heart and also feelings
Should I keep reminding you?
Yorokobi kakan o o wasurenaide kudasai
Watashitachi o ni yotte watasa reru yori akaruku kakan
Nani korera no memori ni nani ga okotta
Karera-jikan no suna ni umore tete imasu ka?
Stop treating me like an animal
I am a human,just like you!
I have a heart and also feelings
Should I keep reminding you?
Watashi nemuri no sakyū kara karera o hora
Warai, gēmu, himitsu o motto
Anata wa zaihō o mitsukeru tame ni kokoromita koto ga arimasu
Matawa karera wa ni jūyōde wa arimasen?
Watashi anata ga yuute hoshī
"Aishiteru"
Toki anata wa watashi o ukeiremasu nodarou ka?
Please discard the weapons of this war
For I will still love you forevermore...
Tell me what you think.Does it need anything changed?Or is this already good?
It's my first time writing a song...