looks pretty good ! 
1 2009-09-04 05:05:43
Re: t:title"hanging around" 238 (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
2 2009-08-19 11:03:28
Topic: Pretty Woman (Will You Go Out With Me Tonight) (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Ive just put some chords together for some lyrics that i put on the poems topic and here they are
Intro: (N.C)
Everybody shout out
At that pretty woman
Everybody kneel down
To that pretty woman
Everybody wants to go out with that pretty woman
Gotta make that pretty woman
Go out with me
Verse 1:
(C)
Saw her laughing there one day
(F)
All my thoughts got blown away
(C)
Girl, you got me hypnotised
(F)
By those beautiful sparkling eyes
(C)
You make me feel so bright
(F)
Baby, go out with me tonight
Chorus:
(C) (Am) (F) (G)
Will you go out with me tonight
(C) (Am) (F) (G)
While the stars shine so bright
(C) (Am) (F) (G)
Will you go out with me tonight
(F)
Oh will you go out
(G)
With me
(C) (Am) (F) (G)
Tonight
Verse 2:
(C)
Standin' there shaking
(F)
Oh my feet are aching
(C)
Snow is falling, getting cold
(F)
Go out with me before I get old
(C)
I said I have got a lotta' love to give
(F)
My feelings for you are massive
Chorus:
( C) (Am) (F) (G)
Will you go out with me tonight
(C) (Am) (F) (G)
While the stars shine so bright
(C) (Am) (F) (G)
Will you go out with me tonight
(F)
Oh will you go out
(G)
With me
(C) (Am) (F) (G)
Tonight
Bridge:
(C) (G) (F)
Oh Oh Oooh
You pretty woman
(C) (G) (F)
Oh Oh Oooh
Soft as the ocean
(C) (G) (F)
Oh Oh Oooh
Filled with emotion
(G)
Yes I'll take your love potion tonight
Middle Eight:
(C) (Am) ( F) (G)
Oh baby, go out with me tonight
(C) (Am) ( F) (G)
Oh baby, dinner by candlelight
(F) (G)
I'm not giving up without a fight
(C) (Am) ( F) (G)
So please, go out with me tonight
Outro:
(F) (G)
Go out with me tonight
(F) (G)
Go out with me tonight
(F) (G)
Go out with me tonight
3 2009-08-19 10:12:29
Topic: Step Into The Muzik (0 replies, posted in Poems)
A Dancey Sort Of Song
Turn off the light
You can rock all night
Your future is bright
Play your cards right
Tonight it's dark
You gotta leave a mark
Such a witty remark
You got the magic spark
And baby
On a night like this
When we kiss
At a time like this
You should know
That this
Is the moment
That i have waited for
and never had anytime before
4 2009-08-19 09:52:38
Re: Pretty Woman (Will You Go Out With Me Tonight) (2 replies, posted in Poems)
any chord suggestions for this song - im stuck
EDIT - dont worry check out the songwriting topic
6 2009-08-17 06:35:05
Re: What was your first song? (173 replies, posted in Acoustic)
mine was better man by robbie williams
7 2009-08-17 06:32:39
Topic: u2's new album (0 replies, posted in Song requests)
i would be good if u2s new album 'no line on the horizon' was in album form on the band page
Thanks in advance
8 2009-08-17 06:29:58
Topic: Pretty Woman (Will You Go Out With Me Tonight) (2 replies, posted in Poems)
This is another that I wrote. Tell me how I could change it. Thanks
Pretty Woman (Will You Go Out With Me Tonight)
Intro:
Everybody shout out
At that pretty woman
Everybody kneel down
To that pretty woman
Everybody wants to go out with that pretty woman
Gotta make that pretty woman
Go out with me
Verse 1:
Saw her laughing there one day
All my thoughts got blown away
Girl, you got me hypnotised
By those beautiful sparkling eyes
You make me feel so bright
Baby, go out with me tonight
Chorus:
Will you go out with me tonight
While the stars shine so bright
Will you go out with me tonight
Oh will you go out
With me
Tonight
Verse 2:
Standin' there shaking
Oh my feet are aching
Snow is falling, getting cold
Go out with me before I get old
I said I have got a lotta' love to give
My feelings for you are massive
Chorus:
Will you go out with me tonight
While the stars shine so bright
Will you go out with me tonight
Oh will you go out
With me
Tonight
Bridge:
Oh Oh Oooh
You pretty woman
Oh Oh Oooh
Soft as the ocean
Oh Oooh
Filled with emotion
Yes I'll take your love potion tonight
Middle Eight:
Oh baby, go out with me tonight
Oh baby, dinner by candlelight
I'm not giving up without a fight
So please, go out with me tonight
Outro:
Go out with me tonight
Go out with me tonight
Go out with me tonight
9 2009-08-17 06:26:22
Topic: The City (2 replies, posted in Poems)
This is MY song that I made up. Please tell me what you think and how I could change it.
Its a Rock song
THE CITY
Saw a man in the street
Was kickin' a can
Saw another on the bus
Lotta' money in his hand
Hard to find a place without cash
Hard to find a place without trash
Looking for a place to crash
In the City
Yeah the City
Raining down on me
Flooding in my cage
Electrical sockets shock me
Head all full of rage
Breaking out of the phone booth
Snapping into the photo shoot
Spending some cash to buy a new suit
In the City
Yeah the City
In the City
Yeah the City In the City
Yeah the City In the City
Yeah the City In the City
Yeah the City In the City
Yeah the City