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2016-12-02 00:24:01

Strummerboy Bill wrote:

I wanted to add, that this is a prime example of what we Chordians do for each other, UD&BW! You post a request for help and here in just a little while here the come, always ready to lend a hand to help get you going. All those people in this thread are also a very nice example of what I always say to a new member to the site: "Teach Us Something!". I bet if one would take the time to go through all the posts here and follow what is written, you could save yourself a really nice sum of cash getting your guitar training right here.
Welcome to the "crew" UD&BW! We're here to help. :-)
Bill

Hey thanks for the welcoming Bill! I have been a member of chordie for a long time, I just never made it to the forums much but it is my go to site for chords! I'll stay in touch now that I know what its all about and how caring and helpful you all have been!

2016-11-29 06:17:16

Peatle Jville wrote:

Here is a little thumb picking idea you might want to try Upside. It is just playing on the A and B strings. I attach a short video I made for you showing what I mean. Hopefully it might be of some help to your guitar playing.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zN-gQVy … e=youtu.be

Thanks for the pointers! I liked the little verse you made up too it made me chuckle!

2016-11-28 05:52:09

Here is what my hand looks like so you can see what I am workin with lol
https://scontent-ort2-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/ … e=583D9CC8
https://scontent-ort2-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/ … e=583DA426

2016-11-28 05:44:02

Peatle Jville wrote:

upsidedown_n_backwards wrote:
Hey Thanks everyone! I would like to hear your rendition on soundcloud Phill!
Here is the attachment to Phills Version on soundcloud below.
https://soundcloud.com/iphillfine/fallen-again

Wow Phill! You rocked it! I am not that good at picking! Not only do I play upside down and backwards but I was also born with a deformed left hand and all I got is a thumb... I can pick like wish you were here and redemption songs intro lol! But I can't hold a pick and I have tried to use a thumb pick to no avail
I am just happy I can play a guitar and sing at all lol... Some chords I'll never hit cuz I play lefty on a righty guitar and then I wouldn't do too well on a banjo or finger picking on a guitar! and power chords are way tough the way I play too

2016-11-28 03:43:22

Hey Thanks everyone! I would like to hear your rendition on soundcloud Phill!

2016-11-25 03:48:34

unclejoesband wrote:

TIGLJK wrote:
I think it needs a chorus that changes the progression up.
I thought the same thing when I read it this morning. I took a slightly different approach to breaking up the steady D C G. Instead of writing new lines for a chorus, I changed the chord progression every 4 lines. I also moved the C a little farther along in the line. The lower case C is in the original position. The song seemed to flow smoother for me where I placed the capital C.
D c C G
To all of those in my life who care about me,
D c C G
my eyes are filled with hurt, so much I can't see.
D c C G
Just please have patience, for I've fallen again,
D c C G
no matter how hard I try, I feel I just can't win.
Em Am
I brush myself off, put my feet back on the ground,
Em Am D
because I know there's a reason, why I'm still around.
Em Am
I try as hard as I can, to do my very best,
Em Am D
but it seems like all my efforts, never please the rest.

D C G
I feel like all the people, I care about the most,
D C G
don't acknowledge me, it makes me feel like I'm a ghost.

ETC, ETC.
Just my 2 bucks. (inflation ya know)

It does seem to flow smoother! I was thinking of making a chorus to it actually! that would be perfect! thanks joe!

2016-11-24 22:01:25

TIGLJK wrote:

upsidedown n backwards
I am more of a songwriter rather than a musician, so I will give you my slant. others on here will be much more of a help in the musical component.
I loved the song. When I read it, I immediately thought of my nephew who has this ongoing battle with dyslexia and depression, compounded by alcohol abuse.
I played it through using this progression G D C G ( becaus e those chords are easiest for me )
I think it needs a chorus that changes the progression up. As the song progressed, it was evident , at least to me, that the subject was reaching out for help in various ways.
As I was reading your lines and playing it through, this little chorus popped in my head
Em Am C G
Ooooh, I’m reaching out, can't you see, I could use a helping hand
Em Am C D
Ooooh, I’m reaching out, won’t you help me to make my stand
Em Am C G
Ooooh, I’m reaching out, to any kind soul still around
G Am C G
someone like you to help me rise , and stay up off the ground

quite simple, but reiterates the message succinctly I believe.
if you don't like it just delete it
If you like it , feel free to use it.
It's just my humble opinion, but I think you've written a really nice piece that is applicable to many emotional circumstances, where we all could use some help.
one last really minor detail - the line you use " i'm down hear on the ground" the word "hear" should be "here" you can fix that easily by going to edit. ( that's the teacher side of me coming through !:) )
Thanks for sharing and Welcome to Chordie !!
Jim
ps can't wait to hear you perform it.

I will give it a go! Thanks for the grammar check too lol... I can't believe I missed it! PS I wrote this in 2009 when I was heavy into a Meth addiction! I've been clean and sober for 3 years and 7 months though

2016-11-24 04:28:35

Hey thanks! I play left handed on a right handed guitar I will have a go at both of your ideas and keepitreal it kinda is played in a 3/4 rhythm
I appreciate your input both of you

2016-11-23 21:04:00

Where in the forum should I go for this?
I came to this one because it says songwriting and that is what I am trying to do...
If anyone can assist me that would be great....
It just keeps repeating D C G with a long G strum down down down up down down down up between every line
Kinda Bob Dylan ish or John Prine style If I could get some pointers from you guys that would be great! I mean should I change some of the chords or add some? IDK

Fallen Again

D C G
To all of those in my life who care about me,
D C G
my eyes are filled with hurt, so much I can't see.
D C G
Just please have patience, for I've fallen again,
D C G
no matter how hard I try, I feel I just can't win.
D C G
I brush myself off, put my feet back on the ground,
D C G
because I know there's a reason, why I'm still around.
D C G
I try as hard as I can, to do my very best,
D C G
but it seems like all my efforts, never please the rest.
D C G
I feel like all the people, I care about the most,
D C G
don't acknowledge me, it makes me feel like I'm a ghost.

I have to follow my heart, its quest is unbound,

I've fallen again, I'm down here on the ground.

A person can only get back up so many times,

before they need some help, that's why I write these lines.

If someone sees on the ground a struggling man,

would you please stop real quick, to offer me your hand.

I've fallen again and I'm on the ground

I said I've fallen again and I'm on the ground

2016-10-19 01:49:17

It is about time that he has won! That man has written so many songs! Not just for his own albums but scores of other songs for other bands!
Greatest lyricist ever! Plus he is a born and bred Minnesotan! As well as the best zodiac sign there is, GEMINI!
He'll come around...

2016-10-19 01:39:03

My Purple and Gold is killing it! SKOL!!! Our defense is awesome, need to tighten up the offense a little bit but... Packers might as well Pack up with the way Rogers is playing... SKOL VIKINGS!!!!!

2013-01-10 23:27:03

mirron wrote:

VERY GOOD WORDS FROM THE HEART!! thats how i write and i can tell u do the same!! keep on writing my friend!!!

Thanks mirron

2011-05-01 22:09:01

thanx

2011-05-01 04:44:21

To all of those in my life who care about me,
my eyes are filled with so much hurt, I can't see.
Just please have patience, for I've fallen again,
no matter how hard I try, I feel I just can't win.
I brush myself off, put my feet back on the ground,
because I know there's a reason, why I'm still around.
I try as hard as I can, to do my very best,
but it seems like all my efforts, never please the rest.
I feel like all the people, that I care about the most,
don't acknowledge me, it makes me feel like I'm a ghost.
I have to follow my heart, its quest is unbound,
I've fallen again, I'm down hear on the ground.
A person can only get back up so many times,
before they need some help, that's why I write these lines.
If someone sees on the ground a struggling man,
would you please stop real quick, to offer me your hand.
I've fallen again and I'm on the ground...

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