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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U8-OpPWhMgg

HERE IS AN AUDIO! Check it out!

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Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

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Sunday Afternoon JCL Original


June 2012




[C]Sunday afternoon I was sle[D]eping, i was drea[Am]ming i wasnt [F]breath[G]ing


[C]Yesterday afternoon in the deep[D]-end, this fool was leaking into [F]quicks[G]and




Whistling a tune you are screaming, my hands are freezing as you please him


Drinking before noon on the ceiling, barely speaking, Im barely breathing






[Am]Im aready [G]done


[Am]Im almost [G]home


[Am]Its all in [G]fun


[Am]Shes been and [G]gone[G7]


Sunday afternoon before we sleep-in,before we begin caught me stealing.


Its way too soon for me to be speaking, about my reasons for this weakness





Bubbling in the spoon  as i breath in the fumes are bleeding  releasing demons


Tied up in a noose is what im feeling and it squeezes as im leaving




CHORUS




Sunday afternoon she was sleeping with my disease in, trying to ease in


Wasting away am i dreaming to hear me screaming I watch her leaving




Good bye was the words i was meaning I had to reach in I had to feel it


Sunday afternoon I was sleeping, i was dreaming i wasnt breathing




CHORUS



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(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks....yup thats a 12

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

In My Head JCL


   




[E]


lost my mind a few times and I cant get it back




im looking for my marbles yeah there sitting with my stash


[A] [E][B7][E][B7]


im going crazy, crazy in my head...yeah im crazy, thats what she said






im going postal up the coast on a one way track


get off of me, what i got and what i had


im going crazy, crazy in my head...yeah im crazy, thats what she said




a little bit mental i started smoking crack


hanging out in alleys drinking form paperbags



im going crazy, crazy in my head...yeah im crazy, thats what she said




completly stark raving mad singing with the band


ive never been complete theres something i dont have


im going crazy, crazy in my head...yeah im crazy, thats what she said




crossed a few wires blew my fuse and my stack


couple screws loose and steam is pouring out my neck


im going crazy, crazy in my head...yeah im crazy, thats what she said




lost my mind a few times and I cant get it back


im looking for my marbles yeah there sitting with my stash


im going crazy, crazy in my head...yeah im crazy, and im better off dead





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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

just edited this plays a lot smoother now, thanks for the tips

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(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RZWJyPywbso

Heres a link....recorded in  my buddys garage (i'm the handsome guy singing) LOL hahhahahaha

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

steelstrings wrote:

Dude, you have my name.

Thats funny..haha, you actually have my name.

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Can't Swim JCL


June 2011               




[B]Can't swim [A]away on the [B]bottom [E]


[B]When I'm [A]holding you [E]down


[B]Fighting for [A]your last [B]breath[E]


[B]You won't [A]make a [E]sound




Can't drink from the broken bottle


Your lips are stitched shut


How will you pour your guts out


When theres no one to trust




[B]Strip [A]down and [B]swim [A]away


[B]Away [A]from the [E]shore


[B]Kneel [A]down and [B]crawl [A]away


[B]Away [A]from the [E]door





Can't listen to or hear the sound


With your hands on your ears


Have my hand over your mouth


The other one wipes your tears




Can't tell how long the clocks been gone


Theres nothing on the wall


You need to get away from here


Whether you swim or crawl




Strip down and swim away


Away from the shore


Kneel down and crawl away

Away from the door




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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Wn6cp6Isp0&NR=1

heres the link to the video for this song. pretty rough recording.

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Well...to put it in a nutshell, this song is about living in a sleezy motel (sleep easy) being addicted to crack-cocaine, and loosing someone you love to addiction...wandering aimlessly as a passenger in my own body...MAKING MUSIC to let out the mess inside my head  out, being poor, hurt, lonely and confused. Drawn between a world of drug abuse, pain and prostitutes and drug dealers...and a world of slow recovery and reality.
Its obvious that there would be a hard time understanding the lyrics in this song for anyone who didnt know my history. And like a said this song is theropy. Thanks for asking though...ill post a link in the future.

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Yeah, the chord placement is not exact...I have only wrote a few songs. How do I post a recording? do i just put it on a site and post a link?

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Sleep EasyJCL Original


May 22, 2010






[D]Its hot in h[A]ere, [D]its hot out[A]side


[D]Walk the p[A]lank, [F#m]will I sur[E]vive


[D]Your over t[A]here, [D]I'm not to p[A]roud


[D]By myself [A]to sing [F#m]out lou[E]d


[Bm]Left [F#m]behind,[E]sworn to [A]secrecy


[Bm]Torn [F#m]apart,take a [E]piece


[D]I drank your b[A]eer, [D]cause I thought you [A]died


[D]Went to the b[A]ank, [F#m]they laughed, I [E]cried



[D]You cut your h[A]air, [D]danced and I [A]bowed


[D]By myself [A]sitting in [F#m]a clo[E]ud


[Bm]Left [F#m]behind,[E]sworn to [A]secrecy


[Bm]Torn [F#m]apart,take a [E]piece


[D]Have no f[A]ear, your [D]caught in a [A]lie


[D]I aint no [A]saint, [F#m]I'll burn in the [E]fire


[D]Its every[A]where, [D]dont make a [A]sound


[D]By myself [A]I was [F#m]lost and fo[E]und


[Bm]Left [F#m]behind,[E]sworn to [A]secrecy


[Bm]Torn [F#m]apart,take a [E]piece



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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

[s o n g]<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<this nees to be added
{ t:T I T L E }<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<THIS is where the title goes
{pick chords}
[a]you are the spark,so[d] light my fire,
[a]you are the flame,of[e] my desire,
[a]you are the one, to[d] turn me on,
so [a]come on baby,you[e]'re my [a]lo-ve.

[a]my heart is like, a [d]burning py-re,
[a]stoke up the flames,so[e] they go higher,
[a]you've got what it takes,my[d] hearts de-sire,
yeah[a] come on ba-by,[e]i'm o-n [a] fi-re.

[a]when you are near,my[d] flame is kin-dled,
[a]and with your love,my[e] body tin-gles,
[a]a thumping heart,a [d]night of dreams,
[a]your my life,my[e] soul,my [a]queen.

[a]its getting late,lets[d] go to sleep,
[a]another new day,of[e] lo-ve be-tween u-s,
[a]happy da-ys,[d]red hot nig-hts,
the[a] fi-re burns,the[e] old lo-ves[a] fla-me.
[/song]


++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++i ve noticed you your song titles ALL have this in front= {t:title}

THIS IS BECAUSE WHEN IT ASKS FOR THE TITLE YOUR ENTERING IT LIKE THAT.....if you notice above , ive added where that information is supposed to be added( with the song,not when it asks for the title)   

JUST TRYING TO HELP-- GIVE IT A TRY - IT SHOULD WORK TO GET THE SONG FORMAT TO WORK

+++++++THIS IS WHAT IT WILL LOOK LIKE+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++



Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.

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good point bonebaddy  ....full apology Russell_Harding     , your songs dont suck ,im just nott interested in them.

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(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

this song is not about maiming killing  with no remorse, or self pity. its about me knocking up some slut and having a daughter whom i am having a hard time incorperating into my family ( 2 boys and a wife)

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sorry you feel that way Russel_Harding ....if you want to read some really lame , un-original , no content songs check out these titles-

Take care of my love
A church across the way
Reflections
Lovers we were
Iron Underware

im sure your familar with them their yours...Sorry Russel_Harding YOUR songs all suck.

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(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Stain SoberJCL Original


June 26 2008






[G]Me and Sarah stain [C]sober [G]today


[G]Found a road [C]going our [D]own way



[G]Better than [C]ever [G]before


[G]We may die rich [C]we may live [D]poor






[C]Cant beleive were [G]living



[C]Loving , laughing , [G]forgiving


[C]Everything I want [G]you give [D]more


[G]Listen to the [C]children run [G]around


[G]We might be up [C]we might go [D]down


[G]Me an Sarah got [C]married [G]yesterday


[G]On the beach in the [C]tide swept [D]away


[C]Cant beleive were [G]living


[C]Loving, laughing [G]forgiving


[C]The best part of it [G]is here [D]today



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(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Face the MusicJCL Original


June 26 2008






[Am]Something different [G]something [Am]pure


[Am]Someone bloodied [G]on the [F]floor


[Am]Something real [G]something [Am]fake


[Am]Too much shit for [G]me to [F]Take....[F] [F] [F]


[G]And I have to face the [Am]music


[G]Latch on to make you [Am]sick


[G]And I have to put you [Am]through this


[G]Its the only thing there [Am]is



[Am]I like to lie I [G]like to [Am]steal


[Am]Choking through [G]you blew [F]chill


[Am]HIke for miles [G]to get [Am]away


[Am]Fell right through this [G]thorny [F]maze....[F] [F] [F]


[G]And I have to face the [Am]music


[G]Latch on to make you [Am]sick


[G]And I have to put you [Am]through this


[G]Its the only thing there [Am]is



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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks again...i try to keep em simple...but i do agree- its definately missing something

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks alot for the feed back...

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Blink TwiceJCL Original


June 25 2008


[F]Blink [G]twice if you can understand [C]me


[F]The words you [G]dont say slander [C]me


[F]Slap me [G]twice for sleeping with the [C]enemy


[F]Then he [G]took her [C]virginity


[F]I go home and i get [C]high


[F]I go home and i get [C]high


[F]I go home i get [G]high and i get [C]lost




[F]Lost my [G]job cant beleive they [C]canned me


[F]On the mic-[G]rophone like a [C]banshee


[F]Prostitute [G]said she was a fri[C]end to me


[F]Trailer trash[G] living better [C]than me



[F]I go home and i get [C]high


[F]I go home and i get [C]high


[F]I go homei get [G]high and i get [C]lost




[F]This is the [G]middle of the [C]torture


[F]Your walls [G]cant put up no [C]support


[F]Someone for-[G]cing there way [C]inside


[F]Seeping through the [G]walls of the for-[C]tress


[F]I go home and i get [C]high


[F]I go home and i get [C]high


[F]I go homei get [G]high and i get [C]lost



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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

first try...

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Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.