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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Roger Guppy wrote:

Hi Goonie,

Like most others I loved the lyrics to your song and agree that there is a lot of potential but it is not helped with having each line starting raggedly about halfway across the page and unless I am reading it wrong every verse has a different chord sequence which will mean a different melody. I do however feel that with a bit of work this could be a very good song.

I would like to hear a recording of this song, in fact, I would love you to prove my comments wrong and have a great song just as it stands.

Thank you,

Roger

you are right that the melody is a bit scattered but it still sounds pretty good..this is only the original chords though. the newer version i did i would have to put on tabs...i am almost finished with the recording so i'll let you know when im done

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(4 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

who here loves the metallica songs?
i know i do, all of them

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(9 replies, posted in Electric)

SOOOO... How 'bout them fenders!?

where is this at?

Finally someone i can relate to....but where are u trying to start the band? i can play guitar and write lyrics but im in st. louis missouri

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(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Europe is a big place there buddy. where at

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(24 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

SGinCYQX wrote:

I'm hoping he posts something for me to hear; I want to give him an honest chance.

and what do u want me to post 4 u?
my guitar playing?

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

so i finally figured out how to fix the chord misplacement, so now you all can play it more right than you were before. now about recording, this is a song that will be sung by my friend Gaby and she's a pretty good singer so ill let you all know when i get it finished....ill also be posting more of my songs soon so be on the lookout.  big_smile

I write music and play guitar. if youre interested in a band and playing an instrument,
then holla back future of alternitive rock band smile

My Friends tell me i'm a really good song writer.
e-mail me
deadmondjosh@yahoo.com:)

Yall are HELLA STUPID!!!!   c'mon, it doesnt take a head cashier at walmart to figure this one out. Here are some suggestions

Maje(pronounced-Mayge)
Jamee(as in a music jam session)
Geekachi(LOL)
Pokemon masters(ROTFL):lol:

Tell us what kind of music your band plays!

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I love to write jesus music.  but after my girlfriend broke up with me i started to write this song

INVISIBLE TO YOU

                                               Dm               G                   Am         
                                               Im lying here, just staring at the ceiling.
                                       Em                          Am        D                                    
                                        Thoughts of you run through my head.
                                         Dm                              G          C        Am
                                       But when I close my eyes, I see you and cry.
                                                      D                          Em      Am
                                                       That’s why I lie awake tonight.


                                                        G                            Dsus    D
                                                         Though you don’t seem to care,
                                                                      C                 Em
                                                                You look right through me.
                                                                      E                  F#m        E         Am
                                                                     And you walk away.
                                                   G          Dsus  D    Am             Em
                                                   If only you knew, who I really am,
                                              C                  F#m   Em  F#m      Em  Am
                                              But to you, im invisible,                 invisible.

                                                   Dm           Am        G               D
                                                   As I watch you, you never even notice,
                                      Am         Em       Am  G           C            D
                                     You don’t see me cry. But why would you care.
                                                           E               D        C
                                                          Im just an average guy.
                                        F                                        F#m    A
                                         Never had the guts to say, I love you.

                                             G                         Dsus      D
                                              Though you don’t seem to care,
                                                      C              Em     
                                                You look right through me,
                                                      E                   F#m       E     Am
                                                      And you walk away.
                                          G          Dsus D     Am            Em
                                           If only you knew, who I really am,
                                  C                  F#m    Em        F#m       Em  Am
                                    But to you, im invisible,                   invisible.

                                     
                                     
                                 

                                       B                     Dm
                                      You don’t know, what you’re missing,
                                     A                    Em         A
                                    ‘Cause I have a heart of gold.
                                     Dm                                     D
                                      But one of these days, you’ll think of me,
                                               C                                         A
                                               In the same way, I thought of you.
                                         G                    D                 C
                                          And you’ll see, that it’s just too late,
                                                          E
                                                          Im over you..
                                                     D                   G       C
                                              Now you’re the one alone tonight,
                                                              F              Em
                                                     And you regret it all,
                                           D                            G         C
                                          Wishing you could go back in time,
                                                         F                E    D
                                                   To change your mistake.
   
                                                  G                        Dsus      D
                                                  Though you don’t seem to care,
                                                         C                 Em
                                                         You look right through me,
                                                       E                   F#m        E        Am
                                                       And you walk away.
                                          G          Dsus  D   Am         Em
                                          If only you knew, who I really am,
                                      C                  F#m  Em  F#m       Em  Am
                                     But to you, im invisible,             invisible.


Solo to end:

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(24 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

SGinCYQX......get a LIFE...Stop jonin' on my favorite bands... if u heard some of my music, it would blow u away!  thats wuts up!!

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(24 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

aint no joke, that fun you dont poke. get yo ass outa here, i hit so hard you gonna tear..
thats wuts up....

thats the greatest song in the world